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Old 10-22-2007, 04:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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What do you think guys???

Take a look at my new site. It's a working progress but anything you have to comment on will be invaluable.

Here's the link: Visit Southwest Florida | Find accommodation, restaurants and things to do in Lee and Collier county

Be critical guys... but not too much

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Old 10-23-2007, 01:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi giovani,
The first thing you need to do is resize your images in photoshop! Resizing in your html editor is not a good idea as the filesize is still the same (and the images also appears distorted) .

I find that the content area is to small, the navigation bar (with the pictures) takes up too much space. You should consider including the images with your writeup. (you should do the same for the google ads, honestly, the way it is, no one will click it, you should put it into your contents itself )
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Old 10-23-2007, 08:08 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi giovani,
The first thing you need to do is resize your images in photoshop! Resizing in your html editor is not a good idea as the filesize is still the same (and the images also appears distorted) .

I find that the content area is to small, the navigation bar (with the pictures) takes up too much space. You should consider including the images with your writeup. (you should do the same for the google ads, honestly, the way it is, no one will click it, you should put it into your contents itself )
He has a point. You could make your font size a bit bigger, too. Best of luck!
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Old 10-24-2007, 02:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I agree with the resize. I was also looking for a header and logo to put coherence in the page altogether.

Put in more contents too.
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Old 10-25-2007, 05:36 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Invest in a better website design. Take down your Google Adsense, promote affiliate links for staying at hotels, review bars, nightclubs, cafe's and restraunts. Promote shops and bars for money. Create a blog.
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Old 10-25-2007, 09:27 AM   #6 (permalink)
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It might be a good idea to set up a form that sends an email automatically, rather than displaying email adresses directly on the page. That way you will get way less spam and your visitors won't need to open up a seperate email client to contact you.
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Old 10-25-2007, 11:03 AM   #7 (permalink)
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The colours are too dull. You have a few yellow, then a dull grey which clash with a blue gradient background. I would reccommend a colour scheme, I have a few nifty sites I could direct you to if you want one. The design is also too simple. You should replace your flat navigation and header with sleek and smooth web 2.0 style designs, but nothing too over the top otherwise they wont see the travel site. If you want more advice I can help just PM me.
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Old 10-27-2007, 08:47 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks everyone... acted on some of your advice and am considering the rest

Keep it coming!!
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Old 11-08-2007, 06:17 PM   #9 (permalink)
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veryy nice m8
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