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Old 04-16-2008, 07:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Review Tevlar...

Please review tevlar saying what you like and what could be changed etc.


Because we at Tevlar love to hear from you!
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Old 04-17-2008, 11:53 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hello there, been checking out your site. I would suggest putting a welcome paragraph or something about your site. I like your design, looks cool.
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Old 04-17-2008, 01:49 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The question I have after looking at the site is what is going to persuade people to use your site instead of Google or Yahoo? Your homepage is a Google search bar. If you want people to use your site there has to be something unique about your site that would make them remember the website name and go there instead of going to already established popular sites.
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Old 04-17-2008, 02:12 PM   #4 (permalink)
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We do know that and as I have said before we do have many things planed for tevlar however I do agree that we should maybe change the google search to tevlar when we have got more money and are growing more.
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Old 04-17-2008, 02:41 PM   #5 (permalink)
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does anyone else get an eyesore when looking at this site? Its VERY blue, the colors are almost distracting. Why when I click on the links does the whole page have to reload? Why does the layout change when I click on programs and videos? It does not seem well put together. I always hate giving negative reviews but I just really want to give you my honest opinion because I know you want tevlar to be successfull. Did you have someone design or code the site for you?
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I agree with lamarsh. You should change the colors.
Another thing that comes to my mind, was that I don't know what the site provides me. What do you do? That's the first thing the readers wan't to know.
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Old 04-17-2008, 03:18 PM   #7 (permalink)
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But dont you think the colours etc makes tevlar look unique (which I wanted), anyway the answer to your question I did not personly design the site the person who I am doing the site knows someone who designed tevlar all by himself. I have told them to put a deciption of tevlar on the main page but they still have not done it for whatever reason.
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Old 04-18-2008, 07:14 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Sorry to be a jerk, but the design of this is all over the place. No real design was done.

Colors, layout, organization, fonts, none of them work together at all.
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Old 04-19-2008, 06:35 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I disagree with you there Matt.
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