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Old 02-10-2008, 07:40 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Review my website please. (incomplete)
Hey, I'd appreciate some feedback on the design of my website. Until the websites done I'm using a subdomain but when it's done i'll change that. My websites at Teenage Drinking Stories

Any feedback and things to change will be appreciated.

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Old 02-10-2008, 11:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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1. Ads have block the writeup
2. Too plain - more picture is nice or more color
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Old 02-10-2008, 11:40 PM   #3 (permalink)
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its yucky. Get a CMS, allow users to rate, submit stories.

try joomla.
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Old 02-11-2008, 03:46 AM   #4 (permalink)
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yeah. i don't like that orange/brown...
you need to preview the site in all popular browsers - I use Firefox and your site doesn't display correctly.
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Old 02-11-2008, 03:55 AM   #5 (permalink)
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yeah same thing with the firefox issue
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Hey misha just went to your site, I suggest that you adjust the width of your body to avoid being covered by the ads. I tried to view it on IE and firefox but i got the same result.
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I agree with the above comments, try a white background, or some type of blue background, those colors are awful. Also adding ratings to stories will let users see feedback of stories they post, making them want to post even more stories. Needs pictures too, maybe have them upload a pic of their drunken friend!!
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Old 02-11-2008, 10:47 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Yeah im not feeling the orange and brown either....
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Old 02-11-2008, 06:18 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Alright...so my color scheme doesn't work...
And I should add a way for people to rate the stories...
And less plain, more pictures.
Alright...I'll completely redo my site

Edit: I need specific examples on what colours would look good on the site...

And the ads are overlapping the text? I tested my site both in firefox and internet explorer and that didn't happen...
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Old 02-11-2008, 06:23 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Also, is there any way to add something so you can submit stories without sending them to me first and add a rating system without Joomla?
I installed joomla and It's quite confusing so I've got no idea what to do with it...
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Old 02-14-2008, 02:25 AM   #11 (permalink)
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It definitely needs more improvements. Yea, try CMS.. I love using Drupal.
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