[Ribeiro953]

Hey guys,

I have not been able to come on for a while but now im back with a new contest (so to say). Im looking for reviews of my website, honest straight to the point criticism. The way this contest will be structured is I will be accepting 100 reviews, from there I will choose what I feel is constructive and most helpful. Winner will win either a business plan written by Gold Leaf Consultants or any of the mentioned services FOR FREE. Get reviewing. All reviews will be sent to info (at) goldleafconsultants (dot) com

www (dot) goldleafconsultants (dot) com

[Jake Worrall]

Hi.
I really only read the first paragraph, but i did pick up some things that were worrying.
I am not going to spoon feed you, but i would seriously consider getting, even paying, someone to proofread your writing. It is very important how you come across, and if my reaction was anything to go by, i would have left straight away; after picking up three errors of spelling and punctuation in the first paragraph (and i'm only 16).

Please learn the difference between 'their' and 'there'.

Jake.

[Ribeiro953]

Recently launched and my designer published the wrong document on the disk I sent him. I am at fault and am embarrassed but this will be taken care of tonight thank you. Contest is still on please ignore the content and focus on the design for now. Thank you.

[jmeijers]

1) When I navigate between pages, the grey title jumps up/down 1 or 2 pixels ... annoying the crap out of me

2) Being 'environmental' the site comes across pretty cold/business-like. I would suggest making it more personal/warm. I understand you are 'gold leaf' but gold and white are pretty cold and business-like.

Maybe add a photo of you and your colleagues/partners/associates and a short resume. This will improve the feeling of being sincere towards your prospective clients.

3) Logo. I would suggest making it more 2D and printer-friendly. It looks nice as it is, but have you tried to fax it, or print it on a black and white laser printer? We are currently implementing a complete re-style in my company and we carry the following versions of a logo:

- Full Color (RGB or similar for computer use)
- Print color (CMYK or similar)
- Single color
- Grayscale
- Black and white only

4) A little content comment none-the-less: hire a good text writer who knows how to write text for internet. It is different than for paper; it needs to be VERY short, powerful, to the point. This is one of the things 99,9% of the people get wrong on their site (even big companies)!

5) I would be interested in receiving a business plan for a project of mine, so let me know I've won please

[Ribeiro953]

Great work, i really like the suggestions. I do have a 2d logo also which is used for faxes and wherever else it is needed (actually it is my current business card logo).

I have had the correct content published so critique away.

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[Ribeiro953]

Contest is posted on twitter and i already have some great responses. please keep them comming.

[newsfreak]

Couple of things -
- Content sounds a little weak - Home, Services and About Us
- Since you guys are consultants - I think Profiles with experience would be really helpful
- Contact Us looks a little weak too.

I do like the design - clean and consistent with the brand logo - gold.

[newsfreak]

Also,
Contact Us and About Us text has differences between buttons/links in the top block and the main block title (capitalization difference - nothing big )