[shahrukh]

my web address is jahenterprises.spruz.com

[emaderam]

It is acceptable, still you can improve it.

[redbull50418]

Ya that site needs some definite improvement. Try oswd(dot)org they have great free templates..what? yes for free! also if you are willing to spend $55-$85 try templatemonster(dot)com they have everything you can possibly imagine for templates.

[pacificalaska]

Your blog entry page is a real put off. Just a string of meaningless cliches:
"We have decided to take our business to the internet so that our customers can easily find information about our services, and have a quick way to contact us.

In the coming weeks we are hoping to have our services added to an online shopping cart on this site for simple and secure electronic payment, giving you even more convince.

We look forward to serving you and building a relationship as we move forward. "

Then I realized all the pages are the same. OK what was your question? Wonderful website. I'll fly over to Pakistan rightaway to buy widgets from you. Give me two dozen of your best widgets.

Like many people, you are trying to shovel in the money without actually producing anything. Get a product first. You don't have to trick people into thinking you are the number one Widget person in Lahore, and now you are willing to let people buy from you on the internet.
Get a product. Put it on your website. Make it pretty. Then come back and ask people to critique it.