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Old 01-04-2008, 07:33 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Review MY business website!!

Tell me what you guys think so far.

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Old 01-04-2008, 08:39 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Crackah,

The site is simple and nice I only have a couple suggestions. First modify the sign that says we are enviromentally friendly to look nicer, the site has a very professional feel to it, but it looks like the sign was made in ms paint. Second, I might try to find a different picture of the enviroment. This one has too much dark from the shadows of the clouds. It kinda make the picture eery and desolate rather than beautiful and friendly like you are trying to portray. That is only my opinion, so don't worry if you like it I am sure others will to but, I don't know it just kinda didn't portray your idea in my mind.
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Old 01-04-2008, 09:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree. Brighter, bluer sky with a sun shining on the bright green plant life.
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Old 01-04-2008, 04:00 PM   #4 (permalink)
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OK cool thanks. I will tell the designer what to change.
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Old 01-04-2008, 11:56 PM   #5 (permalink)
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anything else?
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Old 01-05-2008, 07:19 AM   #6 (permalink)
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it's fine for v1.0
no critical problems

also, your goal right now is to have a mailing list, plus survey results
..both of which you can put down as assets on your balance sheet - so you can borrow against these things, or use them as bargaining chips to recruit board members or cofounders..i.e. try to get an icontact.com account and put a newsletter + survey on your site
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Old 01-05-2008, 05:01 PM   #7 (permalink)
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it's fine for v1.0
no critical problems

also, your goal right now is to have a mailing list, plus survey results
..both of which you can put down as assets on your balance sheet - so you can borrow against these things, or use them as bargaining chips to recruit board members or cofounders..i.e. try to get an icontact.com account and put a newsletter + survey on your site
Thanks. Yeah, I will have feedback forms I will get clients to fill out after we provide our service.

I also have a mailing list from about 30 emails, all not from the website.

Also, I have decided that for now, Leasing is something I do not wish to get into.

That service is changing. The reason is that, there are just too many competitors, finding funds, no need for the service after talking with people.

My business is currently only the education sector, I have talked with some leasing companies who have all showed a expression of interest in my service. I will be following some up, as well as calling new businesses.

The problem is right now im finding them via calling. A few it insulting and wish not to talk with me.

I also need to brand my business, right now I own the domain Welcome to the Frontpage

So therefor, I should call my business Computer Recycling.

But im not sure yet, its not final.

The positives are this, I have 8 deals lined up, completed 3 and am about 3k up in profit! so its all happy so far.
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Old 01-06-2008, 12:39 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Also, if any aussies know businesses with have pcs they no longer need, give me a email!

other comments would be good too
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Old 01-06-2008, 12:14 PM   #9 (permalink)
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No critical problems I like the sun shining into a green field idea.
Maybe get the support of a few local green advacy groups. They can possibly let you put there logo on your page and they will also pu tyour logo on there page.
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I'd recommend adding your phone number to the top right corner of every web page.

Also have a call to action on the home page to harvest contact info. Perhaps offer a white paper or other download in exchange for contact info.
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Old 01-06-2008, 02:23 PM   #11 (permalink)
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