[LolaCatero]

www dot lemonadeandorigami.wordpress dot com

I just started blogging last week!

My goal is to talk about my journey as an aspiring entrepreneur and hopefully pass along useful information to others.

Do I accomplish this?
Any ideas on what to add/subtract?

I'm trying to leave out my day-to-day in fear of boring people! I am attempting to only post things that I think will benefit those that read my blog. Do you agree?

or should I add a more personal point of view?

[robindeer]

nice blog ,the content is gr8 and well written ,but i wuld go mybe on diffrent template ,mybe sometihng a bit more complex

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[reddingl]

I think the content you have written is great. I cant believe you have only just started blogging - the content is useful and engaging. There is no need to write personal stuff like im going to the shops etc but personal experiences and problems that people can relate to will help engage and build a relationship with the audience.

Looking in the long term, you will want an opt in box, links to your other pages/website/facebook etc. Keep blogging great new content and after a couple of months google will pick it up and you will see your traffic slowly grow.

You could do with a little more stuff on your blog though.

Hope this is of some help.

[feint]

Nice blog - you need to change the sub heading from "Just another Wordpress..." to something more meaningful rather than the default. Also put up an "about" page so people can find out more about you and it'll make your readers feel more connected