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Old 04-15-2008, 12:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Whats up guys im looking for some feedback on my blog all of my pages aren't up yet because i haven't figure out how to put a wordpress for my other links but if anyone has any ideas on how i can improve the apearance or navigation it would be greatly appreciated thanks! PCWizBlog - All of your PC needs under one domain!
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Old 04-16-2008, 12:28 AM   #2 (permalink)
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It appears too monochromatic. It looks clean but I would use more contrasting and brighter colors.

What do you plan to do with the site.
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Old 04-16-2008, 03:39 AM   #3 (permalink)
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It appears too monochromatic. It looks clean but I would use more contrasting and brighter colors.

What do you plan to do with the site.
I agree with leadvine. I think you have to change the link's color too. It really hard to see the links. I believe for some people they might think that it only words appear in your navigator instead of links
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Old 04-16-2008, 10:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hello there, just been through your site. Initially the site looks fine. I would suggest putting a header design and change the background color different from your content.
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Old 04-16-2008, 01:15 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Nice and clean site. Maybe use different colors for the font and use some bold...
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I think maybe the blues and greys go too good together. They blend in too much. I feel myself straining to read because it all looks the same color. Use some colors that jump out at you better.
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Thanks everyone for all of the feedback im going to change the link colors to try to contrast so its easier to read and try to bold it... im trying to make money from ads because its a blog but if anyone has any better suggestions that would be sweet im really new to all of this.... i just thought i would give it a try thanks guys!
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Old 04-17-2008, 06:20 PM   #8 (permalink)
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hm clean design. But i do worry about how small the whole site is. More and more people are getting widscreens bigger than 17inchs and it just seems so tiny on a big screen. (i have 24 inch and 17inch) Just a thought.
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I think you need a little of contrast, the page acually looks like a generic pop-up page.
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