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Old 10-26-2007, 12:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Please tell me what you think of my design. Please read the post first

I am starting a new project and finally just got done with the design. This has no logo yet and i used words i just copied and pasted from other sites that wont be there but I simply want comments on the design

the adsense ads will be gone though...i dont like them

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comment on the same as well
and if you can suggest any better ones
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Old 10-26-2007, 12:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Chuff,

I think overall the site looks pretty good. I do agree with you that you will need to remove the google ads. I don't feel that google ads make any site look professional especially when you are trying to sell a business service.

The color scheme of the site looks very good, and it is inviting to your users. It has several qualities of a trendy site with the brightly colored and bubbly icons that are very attractive to users right now.

Once you start creating your content and adding more pages it will be easier to critique the site since we can not really say much about flow or functionality.

Anyway, I like the way the site looks and I wish you luck in your venture.
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Old 10-26-2007, 01:02 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanx alot
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Old 10-26-2007, 01:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I agree with creadiv. Overall it looks pretty good. Nice Job.

instead of having ads in various spots, you might want to have a specific spot on the page that is for "sponsoring sites" or something like that.

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Old 10-26-2007, 01:33 PM   #5 (permalink)
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The site looks good! What is your revenue model for the site is it just ads?
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Old 10-26-2007, 05:15 PM   #6 (permalink)
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ads is not the online source of revenue
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Old 10-26-2007, 08:19 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I also agree in removing Google ads. I like the color scheme. Ad maybe make the Netrepreneur funding work bolder...

Best of luck!
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Old 10-28-2007, 10:16 PM   #8 (permalink)
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yea
well the text wll be moved when i am finshed with the logo
thanx guys
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Old 11-02-2007, 10:45 AM   #9 (permalink)
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ok
made a few small changes
what you guys think?
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Old 11-03-2007, 09:43 PM   #10 (permalink)
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make sure that you avoid having too much visual clutter on the first page...users want to quickly find relevant information
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Old 11-08-2007, 06:22 PM   #11 (permalink)
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work on the layout m8
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