Please review my site www.entrepreNEWS.biz

**entreprenewsbiz** · 07-09-2009 10:43 PM

I'm a former TV journalist who just launched this site.
Feedback please?
Feel free to comment on the posts under the stories on entrepreNEWS.biz.

**entreprenewsbiz** · 07-13-2009 06:56 PM

I'm still hoping for feedback!

**chuff1026** · 07-13-2009 08:56 PM

looks descent
i will use less space on the top if I were you
also, it does not catch my attention
by moving the site up and getting rid of space thats bein gwasted on top
u should be more attractive
also, you may want to include an image in each post..

**rpermana** · 07-13-2009 10:54 PM

font & articles for each article looks fine..

alignment for your advertisement is a bit messy.

**KohJack** · 07-13-2009 11:43 PM

Hi Joyce and think that your site has a good concept. I do however think that your site should be more clear about the source of your information. If you are the primary source for the information then I think that you should elaborate more on who you are on the "Creators Corner" section on your blog/site. This will help with the credibility, although based on what I read you seem like a pretty tough chick

Your logo needs to be redesigned. It makes your site appear to be amateur. The first negative thing that I noticed was that you have too many google ads. All of those ads makes your site look cluttered and unprofessional.

You should remove the link to your Linkedin profile and keep it all on your site.

Now to the positives......

I like the fact that you have categories and I think you have a good idea. I dabble in web design and wouldn't mind helping you develop a new logo. I would like to discuss an idea that I've had with you. If you're interested send me a PM and let me know.

**entreprenewsbiz** · 07-16-2009 09:18 PM

Originally Posted by KohJack

Hi Joyce and think that your site has a good concept. I do however think that your site should be more clear about the source of your information. If you are the primary source for the information then I think that you should elaborate more on who you are on the "Creators Corner" section on your blog/site. This will help with the credibility, although based on what I read you seem like a pretty tough chick

Your logo needs to be redesigned. It makes your site appear to be amateur. The first negative thing that I noticed was that you have too many google ads. All of those ads makes your site look cluttered and unprofessional.

You should remove the link to your Linkedin profile and keep it all on your site.

Now to the positives......

I like the fact that you have categories and I think you have a good idea. I dabble in web design and wouldn't mind helping you develop a new logo. I would like to discuss an idea that I've had with you. If you're interested send me a PM and let me know.

Thanks.
I have a logo.
Problem is - the wordpress theme I chose doesn't support having a logo in the header.
I'm not a wordpress expert so that's hurting a bit.
And I'm trying to find a more "consistent" look for my ads.
I'm about to start selling my own ads at a very "low" price to start.

**zukny** · 07-17-2009 09:28 AM

I would move some of the Advertising links that you have so all 125x 600 vertical banners are in line with all other banners that are only 125 pixels wide.
And so on. Just to make everything aligned.

Get rid of 1 of the 125x600 banners above the website. Two is to much, and also < center > before the ad and < / center> after the add to make it align with your site properly

It looks like your using wordpress which is what I use. If not, then forget this part. But in my wordpress when Im creating a "story" or a "post" theres a MORE tag that I can use, to cut half the story off, and make the person click the story to read the rest of it.

I do that so they are mainly looking at just the Image / Name of the Post / and a paragraph if they are interested.

Its a working progress though and thats what this is all about

I had some pretty harsh comments on mine not being "attractive" enough as well, theres lots we can do to make it better
feel free to come look at my website to see what im talking about with the MORE tag

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**KohJack** · 07-17-2009 08:01 PM

A friend of mine has a wordpress blog that he had custom designed. I think you should take a look at it and consider having some customization done.

My friends site is www.lifeiswhatyoumakeofit.com check it out.

**clifford co** · 07-21-2009 05:11 AM

have you tried going to

entrepreNEWS.biz › Log In

ht tp:// entreprenews.biz/ wp-admin/ theme-editor .php

and edit your Header.php the same way you do when embedding your ads
once you logo is uploaded set the url of your logo to scr like

<embed src="http://entreprenews.biz/logo.jpg">

i think this should work and should over write the theme to add a Logo