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Old 01-18-2008, 06:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Post Please review my site

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please review my site and let me know what you like or dislike. I'll take both compliments and criticism. Thank you and have a nice day

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Old 01-18-2008, 07:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like, I'd buy from there. Very professional and clean.

Only thing I would do is better the logo. The subtitle is not clear, and it would sound better if not containing the word "making" just "shopping for your kitchen as easy as 123" makes it seem simpler. There is also too much blank space up top. There should be a nice graphic, some colors that fit and flow with your logo and rest of site. I would also recommend that you change your meta tags up top, its says "shopsimply123.com store". It should describe your store briefly, or have your logo's subtext. Overall, it looks very nice, keep it up.

Oh, and a toll-free number up top would also be nice.

Good Luck!
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Old 01-18-2008, 07:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thank you

Thank you very much for the review. I actually whipped up this website in about 2 days but I'll definitely change the slogan(style/font and text) and try do to something with the white space and other things you have suggested as well. Once again thank you.

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Old 01-18-2008, 08:36 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Looks very nice and clean but I agree that you need to do something else with the logo.
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Old 01-18-2008, 08:38 PM   #5 (permalink)
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do you mean just with the slogan under it or the whole logo?
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Old 01-18-2008, 09:29 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Well the slogan is one thing, but a new logo would be nice. Actually, on this forum there are plenty of logo designers that would we willing to help you with that.
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Old 01-19-2008, 11:29 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Look good. I wish you the best of luck
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Old 01-19-2008, 10:33 PM   #8 (permalink)
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thanks

thank you very much!
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Old 01-20-2008, 03:42 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I know it is the website that I am supposed to be reviewing, not the business but I think the name of the business could use the most improvement.

shopsimply123.com: What does that alone tell me? That you sell SOMETHING, that you reckon it is simple, and that your numeric skills are atleast as good as 3.

I wasn't expecting to find a store that sells only kitchen related products...so why isn't that featured in the name? That immediately identifies which market you are in.

Simple: Why is it simple? What makes your website more simple than, or as simple as, every other web-based store. I'm not saying it isn't simple, just that you haven't cashed in on that claim...you need to explain WHY.

123: I get the pun but when I see 123 on the end of a domain it generally suggests to me that you couldn't get the domain you wanted to so you put 123 on the end of it... which immediately takes the 'simple' part out of it.

Otherwise a clean looking site, I like how in your about us section you have featured your security features heavily. That is becoming increasing important to consumers with identity theft on the rise.

Good-luck with your new website!
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Old 01-20-2008, 01:45 PM   #10 (permalink)
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thanks

Grizzly you are absolutely right! Thanks for the review
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Old 01-20-2008, 08:24 PM   #11 (permalink)
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1. Very Clean Website. Good Navigation.
2. Don't worry about the URL, I think you can relate it to the check out experience. I haven't try your check out yet but if you are able to allow your customer to check out within "3 easy step" then you have something to relate to.
3. I got no other comment EXCEPT your color tone. Since your targeted user group are housewife (female mainly) you might want to go for a little subtle color tone, more of dark-pink or orange that relate back to the color tone that girl will love.

Overall good work
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Old 01-20-2008, 10:05 PM   #12 (permalink)
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I think you could do some things to entice your target market just a bit more. The banner is a good place to start. And the name sort of left me wondering, too. But I see you've purchased the domain name.

If you want to stand out in the market, you need a strategy so you can make the site conversion friendly. Do you have one? If so, post it here. Even if it's not a work of literary art, you need a strategy that will define your site and audience.

There are some really nice elements and it's nice and clean and not overly cluttered. That gives the site some focal points.

By the way, that cuisinart ice cream maker rocks.
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Old 01-21-2008, 07:59 PM   #13 (permalink)
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