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Old 04-11-2008, 12:45 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Please Review my First Website

Hi all,
I would really appreciate it if you took the time to review my first and newest website, Fiscal Frenzy. It is a financial site with market updates, stock info, stock recommendations, forums and polls. Thank you for any recommendations as I have tried to make the design as clean as possible, thank you for all the help
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Old 04-11-2008, 09:00 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi ttfrenzy,
I love your web design especially the way to put your ads. I think you can take one more step to work on your articles. I clicked on your article section and I found that the design has not ready yet. I think this section is important so I suggest you to put more time on the content since your web design is quite ok
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Old 04-11-2008, 10:22 AM   #3 (permalink)
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you can avoid blue links and the red&green text over the gray is not very good as well.
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Old 04-11-2008, 10:22 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hello there, I've checked out your site and it's looking great. I like how simple it is, and the lay-out is very neat. Good Job!
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Old 04-11-2008, 10:38 PM   #5 (permalink)
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looks good. nice work
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Old 04-13-2008, 02:50 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I think the site design is very choppy. The italic links looks very pixelized, along with the outside border of the design. I think you need to clean it up a bit. Overall good text placement, but just looks very choppy.

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Old 04-13-2008, 10:15 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Thanks for the help everyone I'm still fixing glitches for instance I just fixed the article thing, are there any other comments on the design? and also what exactly would better the content?
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Old 04-13-2008, 11:04 PM   #8 (permalink)
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It is a little bit busy for my tastes. Overall, not a bad site. A recommendation, however, would be to look at some finance-oriented Joomla templates. I have seen a few layouts that would work as an example for you to go off of.

As far as a first- you did well. It is certainly better-off than my first attempt at HTML programming back in the late 90's! Keep up the good work, and I hope to see more of your content on these forums!
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Old 04-14-2008, 06:50 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Nice website!

Try to add more pages related to Stock Market for more familiar to people about your services and good for search engine ranking purpose.
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Old 04-14-2008, 11:57 PM   #10 (permalink)
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What other pages could I have pertaining to the stock market, any suggestions would be great and I have fixed all the previous glitches with the site, thank you for pointing them out.
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Old 04-15-2008, 12:42 AM   #11 (permalink)
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content looks ok but design, a lot to put in yet
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Old 04-15-2008, 06:46 AM   #12 (permalink)
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it could just be me but in firefox the about us and forum buttons seem just a little different than the others, a little pixilated. The logo needs to be polished up a bit along with other things but I can still tell its a bull and a bear