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Old 03-24-2008, 01:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Please Review!!!

Please review my website cwear.com The site sells sun protective clothing for kids and adults. Your comments will be helpful to improve my website.
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Old 03-26-2008, 02:34 AM   #2 (permalink)
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decent site. good luck
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This is a great site.

It's bright and colourful and has a real summery feel about it, which is perfect for the topic.

It's a nice simple name, which is also good.

My one comment:-

The top half of your homepage looks great with the pictures you have chosen.

However, the bottom half of the homepage has too much copy.

It looks very cluttered, although I get your point about protection against the sun and skin cancer, etc.

If I was you I would take this quote out of its current position and shift it under the photos: "One blistering sunburn in childhood more than doubles a person’s chance of developing melanoma later in life" - The Skin Cancer Foundation, NY.

This line tells exactly the same story as all that copy. You could then link that quote to all the other information you have about skin cancer and put it on another page with some more photos (even of melonomas and skin cancer).

Your homepage will then look less cluttered without all that copy.

Apart from that, this is a really good site and I think it will be very successful.
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Old 03-27-2008, 04:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hi everybody.

Oh, this site is very nice and i like it. I think it will develop more and more.
Good luck .....
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Great site..

cheers!
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Old 03-27-2008, 11:23 AM   #6 (permalink)
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i agree with Safari, take out all the words at the bottom. no one wants to read all that on your homepage, especially when your site is selling clothing.
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too be honest i dont think it looks that good.

your header image is VERY poor quality. you need to take a high res image and optimize it correctly.

I dont know why, but i hate to see red text on websites. It's ok in your sidebar.

I'd recommend you do something with your menu. i dont like that plain white mouse over look.

You also need some padding on the left of your content.

sorry bout all the crit; hope it helps.
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