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    fluffysamantha is offline Junior Member
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    Please help me review

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    The design was fine but I think you must add few graphics like students..or just place it in banner
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    Hi FluffySamantha,

    Well done on creating a very stylish and professional-looking website design!

    Here are my thoughts:

    1. The series of images that form the header looks really stylish. I wonder whether the header would 'pop' and capture the attention a little more if the photos were in colour?

    2. The title text is hidden behind the images, at least it is in my browser. So I can only see 'Building...', then a little hint of some letters covered up beneath. Something needs to be shifted about there...

    3. Well done on writing articles to draw in interested surfers from other areas of the net, and to give the Search Engines lots of keyword-laden text to pick up on. Have you uploaded those articles to any of the Article Farms yet? You could try:

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    The reason for this is because Google will give high marks to whichever website it considers has published the 'original' version.


    4. Finally, might I suggest that you complete the links on the 'Online Education' page, or hide the page from public view until it's done. Unfinished pages on a website just scream 'unprofessional', even when the rest of the site is great. After all, you don't want to put off a single visitor.

    Good luck!
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    hi,

    Your website look good. your design is also good and I like it.
    Good Luck

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    i don't like the color seems very "aged"
    i would use some bright colors

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    I like your site.Good Luck
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