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Old 04-08-2008, 08:31 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Opinions would be great !

I know it is a little busy but,can you get the concept if you where to judge by the website ? i get lots of hits but not many call with question about how our company works. Automotive Services of Boston Homepage
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Old 04-08-2008, 08:55 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Overall the design of the site is ok. I found that your site is slightly aligned to right hand side. So in my firefox, part of your contact number is blocked.

Besides that I found that you should add some "urgency" or "incentives" to your visitors. Maybe call now to get 10% discount or what.. People usually do thing because they want some kind of benefits.

Just my piece of mind. Hope that helps
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Old 04-08-2008, 11:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hello Joec! Just checked out your site and it looks just fine. Only a little adjustment on the navigation bar to the left side panel that includes warranties, fleet service, etc... Also about the logos on the right side panel, aligning them in just one column would make it looking neat. Little adjustments and your good to go.
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Thanks guys, I do take all advise seriously THANKS !
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Old 04-08-2008, 05:05 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Just a little constructive criticism here so please take it as such.
I'm not much of an html guy but I dont think that you have any meta-tags. Which would be a big reason why search engines arent seeing you. In addition when I first hit the site and thought you were in insurance or consulting or something vague. Where's the pictures of the mechanic? The last guy I want touching my car is the white collar guy in your picture or the lady who....found her keys! The page also opened for me to scrolled to the left as the earlier poster said. It looks like the top border is set too far left.
On the positive, your content is great! I didn't see any pricing which is probably common for that industry but that's one of the things it occurs to me I would look for as a consumer.
Also as a consumer looking for a mechanic in Bostin, I'd quickly move past your page as at first glance it wouldn't look like a mechanics shop at all. I'd also stress "Boston" more. For example, make the title of the home page "Boston Automotive Mechanic" or whatever your most important keywords are.
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Joe-
Just a little constructive criticism here so please take it as such.
I'm not much of an html guy but I dont think that you have any meta-tags. Which would be a big reason why search engines arent seeing you. In addition when I first hit the site and thought you were in insurance or consulting or something vague. Where's the pictures of the mechanic? The last guy I want touching my car is the white collar guy in your picture or the lady who....found her keys! The page also opened for me to scrolled to the left as the earlier poster said. It looks like the top border is set too far left.
On the positive, your content is great! I didn't see any pricing which is probably common for that industry but that's one of the things it occurs to me I would look for as a consumer.
Also as a consumer looking for a mechanic in Bostin, I'd quickly move past your page as at first glance it wouldn't look like a mechanics shop at all. I'd also stress "Boston" more. For example, make the title of the home page "Boston Automotive Mechanic" or whatever your most important keywords are.
Thanks Rocky,All valid points.
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Set the width of website and add links to the bottom.
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