New Site - Would love Feedback

[keyeraines]

I've just started a new site to be a vehicle for people looking to start an online business. I must say it's in it's infancy stages but I expect that it will be a "real" resource as it grows. Gaining advice from your peers is by far better than gold. After all it's people like us that will visit these sites and have to use them. I really appreciate any advice. BTW I just signed up today and looking forward to getting to know some of you and hope that I can contribute to this forum and help others along the way. Thanks!!!

Resource Center for Online Businesses - Doing Business Online

[s2008aw]

whats the site?

[keyeraines]

I have to make 5 posts before it will allow me to post my url. I'm checking out other people's sites now. Sure I will have something to say.

[pacificalaska]

I looked at some of your advertisements ("articles") and am trying to decide how your English fluctuates between highly fluent and functionally illiterate. For example here :
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Nakisha Muhammad (Keyeraines)"

You should study the famous American English student / baseball player Yogi Berra. His advice was "When you come to a fork in the road, take it."

Is "Keye Raines" a composite of several people, each writing article / advertisements. Some very good English speakers, others not?

[cutebeast]

1. Nothing hold my interest on that site.
2. What look clickable and interesting are ads only.

[florie]

Nice and clean....Just needs to be optimized...

[keyeraines]

I looked at some of your advertisements ("articles") and am trying to decide how your English fluctuates between highly fluent and functionally illiterate. For example here :
"There are multifarious free ride tools on the internet that you can appropriateness to decide if your Meta tags bygone the test. Simply force to your favourite search engine and type in "free keyword analyzer" and espy how you degree up.
For else tips for doing pursuit online, interview us at Doing Business Online Resource Center
To your online success,
Nakisha Muhammad (Keyeraines)"

You should study the famous American English student / baseball player Yogi Berra. His advice was "When you come to a fork in the road, take it."

Is "Keye Raines" a composite of several people, each writing article / advertisements. Some very good English speakers, others not?

Just an FYI, I made the terrible mistake of adding other people's articles to my site. As a result, I have some content that is horrible. I am writing content for those areas myself and will be posting it soon. Thanks for the honesty. Very bad mistake. Hence, another thing I can warn my visitors to not do.

[ron komorowski]

I like it! I'm not too computer literate and can't give a technical veiwpoint but it seems structured clean and I especially like that unique orange! Color is sooo important. I believe the right colors can hold an interest times longer. Good luck!!!

Ron
Inventor of Handi-Straps

[jsimp]

The site looks extremly well organized. All i would say is not to have to much information on your home page cause then it might seem like you are trying to sell something and when people think you are trying to sell them something I run away.