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    New Site: Looking for Errors/Problems

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    Last edited by P11; 11-01-2007 at 10:57 AM.

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    The site is very nice. It looks very professional and you should have good luck with it.

    The only thing I noticed is that the site is a little bit image heavy which is causing it to load slowly.
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    bump, need feedback before its finalized.

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    1) Index kinda takes too long to load
    2) The "visa" logo for store products section seems wrong
    3) "No Restriction Requests*" with legality disclaimer is unprofessional
    4) A lot of the language sounds pumped up, for example:
    Through our revolutionary website & practices we promise unprecedented service, trustworthy clientele, merchandise, and resources unforeseen in the global trade industry.
    5)About that name... a 17 letter domain name???
    Spend $6 at 1and1 for a nice 4 or 5 letter .com
    i'm not advertising, but look at vegsites.net
    You asked for "typo" type errors, and there is something similar that is annoying. At the bottom of each page is a paragraph, a heading and a logo (times 4...client... services etc). In some places the heading is linked, in others not. It needs to be the same everywhere, and I would link the text of the mini-paragraphs too.
    Good Luck.

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    1. I assume it takes a while to load (3-5 secs for me)
    2. The store is currently not operating so disregard that section
    3. refers to quantity/mass, not the type of product.
    4. what domain would you suggest seeing as crownglobal.com is taken.

    Thanks for reviewing the site.

    Quote Originally Posted by pacificalaska View Post
    1) Index kinda takes too long to load
    2) The "visa" logo for store products section seems wrong
    3) "No Restriction Requests*" with legality disclaimer is unprofessional
    4) A lot of the language sounds pumped up, for example:
    Through our revolutionary website & practices we promise unprecedented service, trustworthy clientele, merchandise, and resources unforeseen in the global trade industry.
    5)About that name... a 17 letter domain name???
    Spend $6 at 1and1 for a nice 4 or 5 letter .com
    i'm not advertising, but look at vegsites.net
    You asked for "typo" type errors, and there is something similar that is annoying. At the bottom of each page is a paragraph, a heading and a logo (times 4...client... services etc). In some places the heading is linked, in others not. It needs to be the same everywhere, and I would link the text of the mini-paragraphs too.
    Good Luck.

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    very professional looking site. don't forget your meta stuff, title/keywords/descriptions etc..

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    Will do, thanks for the feedback everyone. I will take down the url to keep website statistics accurate for clients.

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    good work keep it up (Y)

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