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Old 02-18-2008, 01:03 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 02-21-2008, 05:16 PM   #2 (permalink)
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As I was reading the first page, a very rude popup asks "Have Questions? Live chat. Close Invite" Completely blocks what I was reading. Very obnoxious. Reminds me of the boyscout dragging the little old lady across the street. You should offer assistance, not beat people over the head with it.

"All of our Staff – from Webmasters and Developers to Business Analysts – bring aboard a firm grounding in involvement and a dedication to excellence." Huh?

"What we value as a team

* A Feeling of Community
A shared fellowship with everyone that works at Prime Outsourcing. A sense that this is the place to be.

* A Drive for the Critical
An acuity for what commands immediate attention without losing the big picture."
There are so many types of frauds. Instead of trying to develop a new way to BS people, try to be straightforward.

"At Prime Outsourcing, we provide more that just dedicated and professional solutions. We're more into people." I think I need a cybervomit bag.

"Q. What are the operating hours of your company?
(...)

* Please contact us for mid shift schedule.
* Coffee breaks and lunch break not exceeding one (1) hour. "

You're not a real company. Are you?

I'm not real clear what you are offering. If there are real advantages to someone doing business with you, you should spell them out. Your "articles" section is weak, to put it politely. Statements like
"Outsourcing is one of the most powerful business tools to date."
take away the credibility of your articles authors.

Start with facts. The truth.
Build a framework. Then fluff it up a bit with BS and lies only if absolutely necessary.
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I'm not really sure what the company does. Is it web design? Couldn't find any previous works.

I agree with the popup. Really annoying.

Uhm, the site could use some fresh up, looks like an outdated design only with lots of text that you barely don't even feel like reading.
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