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11-24-2007, 01:26 PM
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Location: United States
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I think you have a nice start as well. However, you most certainly could change some things. I like the colors and the layout but I think it needs to be cleaned up a bit. My feeling is that it could be a bit more professional. Let me know if you need help.
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11-29-2007, 06:45 PM
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#17 (permalink)
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Location: alabama
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Great job and I can tell you're a great designer
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11-29-2007, 07:13 PM
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I like the colors used.
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12-16-2007, 12:14 PM
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Nice website. But, do you have a Unique Selling Proposition?(USP)
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12-17-2007, 04:03 PM
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#20 (permalink)
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Location: North Carolina
Total Points: 2,063.47
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The colors are ok but...
1.) FIX THE ERRORS. Go to validator.w3.org and validate your site.
2.) Reduce the header size and image filesize.
3.) Do something to the background, it's to plain.
4.) What's special about your design company over the billions of others? Add something unique.
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12-17-2007, 04:47 PM
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#21 (permalink)
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maybe add some flash? like the land and leisure site. dont over-do it though
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12-17-2007, 06:03 PM
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#22 (permalink)
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Location: North Carolina
Total Points: 2,063.47
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If you have a flash site, how are you going to be seen from Google and other search engines? Search bots can't index flash websites as good since there isn't any markup to search for keywords through.
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12-17-2007, 07:15 PM
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Simple, clean, and effective, but if I was looking for a complex site, I would look elsewhere, based on my perception of your website.
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12-17-2007, 09:50 PM
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I like it so far except I really have a problem with the text in the box headed by the words "business starter package." I'm not entirely sure what's off about it, but it looks a bit like when someone's writing a card and thinks they have enough space for the words but have to squish them in at the end. Maybe center that text out and space it a bit better? In my opinion, that would make a huge difference.
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12-17-2007, 10:53 PM
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#25 (permalink)
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Location: LA
Total Points: 16,327.94
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Hi,
It's missing the wow factor. It's good-just not wow. You know I liked the work you guys did for Xeslife website. I hope I got the name right. That has a wow factor. It held my attention.
LT
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12-18-2007, 02:27 AM
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#27 (permalink)
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Location: Nevada
Total Points: 4,971.21
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nice header and color combination. Great job!
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