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Old 11-24-2007, 01:26 PM   #16 (permalink)
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I think you have a nice start as well. However, you most certainly could change some things. I like the colors and the layout but I think it needs to be cleaned up a bit. My feeling is that it could be a bit more professional. Let me know if you need help.
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Old 11-29-2007, 06:45 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Great job and I can tell you're a great designer
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Old 11-29-2007, 07:13 PM   #18 (permalink)
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I like the colors used.
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Old 12-16-2007, 12:14 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Nice website. But, do you have a Unique Selling Proposition?(USP)
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Old 12-17-2007, 04:03 PM   #20 (permalink)
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The colors are ok but...

1.) FIX THE ERRORS. Go to validator.w3.org and validate your site.

2.) Reduce the header size and image filesize.

3.) Do something to the background, it's to plain.

4.) What's special about your design company over the billions of others? Add something unique.
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Old 12-17-2007, 04:47 PM   #21 (permalink)
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maybe add some flash? like the land and leisure site. dont over-do it though
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Old 12-17-2007, 06:03 PM   #22 (permalink)
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If you have a flash site, how are you going to be seen from Google and other search engines? Search bots can't index flash websites as good since there isn't any markup to search for keywords through.
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Old 12-17-2007, 07:15 PM   #23 (permalink)
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Simple, clean, and effective, but if I was looking for a complex site, I would look elsewhere, based on my perception of your website.
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Old 12-17-2007, 09:50 PM   #24 (permalink)
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I like it so far except I really have a problem with the text in the box headed by the words "business starter package." I'm not entirely sure what's off about it, but it looks a bit like when someone's writing a card and thinks they have enough space for the words but have to squish them in at the end. Maybe center that text out and space it a bit better? In my opinion, that would make a huge difference.
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Old 12-17-2007, 10:53 PM   #25 (permalink)
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Hi,

It's missing the wow factor. It's good-just not wow. You know I liked the work you guys did for Xeslife website. I hope I got the name right. That has a wow factor. It held my attention.

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Old 12-18-2007, 01:41 AM   #26 (permalink)
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Doesn't look like a site that would impress me if choosing a web designer... could be good for small businesses as they are looking for something cheap they can just have online with a contact number and email....

look at Website Designers, Website Developers and Search Engine Optimization » Fatpublisher and IASP :: Web Design, Web Development, CMS, CRM, Search Engine Optimization, SEM & M-Sites (they look like companies who know where it's at)
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Old 12-18-2007, 02:27 AM   #27 (permalink)
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nice header and color combination. Great job!
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