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Old 07-16-2009, 12:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My Morning Story - Website
Please review my website :

Tired of reading the news every day at work? Then Come to My Morning Story and read something interesting and different.

http://www.mymorningstory.com
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Old 07-16-2009, 03:22 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Please review my website :

Tired of reading the news every day at work? Then Come to My Morning Story and read something interesting and different.

My Morning Story
No exaggeration or disrespect, but the first sign i got was dull.
I think you need to ad more life to you website in anyway possible from
a customer head graphic, to a nice background, to a funny slogan, an make the post full of life.

You can go to monstercovers.com for the head graphic and you should fin your favorite blogs and see why people like them and make your similar , but unique!
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take away the picture below the tweet logo. Also make a banner that doesnt look like 1995 font. And the light blue background doesnt work either.

Sorry if this is harsh just trying to help!
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Thanks for the critique. Really appreciate what you guys said. I'll look into making things "sexier"
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