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Old 05-03-2008, 05:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Lightbulb My first site finished (Arcade site)

Hi,
I have been working on my website for a while now, and I am finally finished. It is primarily an arcade site. But it also includes online videos and fun quizzes to take. I would greatly appreciate any advice.
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my site: games-and-things.com
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Old 05-04-2008, 06:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Alright here ya go:
Its hard to read the games listing on the main page. Try lining the grid items up.

There are a lot of these sites around, in order to be competitive (IMHO) you will need to have a better layout and navigation, as well as faster service.
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Old 05-04-2008, 07:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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There's too many pictures on the main page. Loading becomes kind of slow. Probably you can reduce the number of games in the main page and focus more on the popular games.
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Old 05-04-2008, 07:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I actually think it looks pretty good. Yes, the front page is a little confusing, but it's not bad and I was easily able to navigate the page to the games. You should show where players rank in the high scores before asking them so sign up. You'll have an easier time getting people to register to save and show off their scores if they already see that they are ranked.
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Old 05-05-2008, 01:59 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks to everyone for the advice!
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Old 05-06-2008, 04:07 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hello there, I just checked out your site and it's looking great. I agree with above comment about top player rankings, with the scores showing up, users will motivate to sign up. Overall your site looks great only a little tweak.
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The font you have chosen for your logo gives the impression that it is cut off at the bottom, i.e. the 'g' of things. Perhaps you could just smooth it down a little and not make it as sharp?
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