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Old 03-25-2008, 12:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I just got done editing my capture page, and need some reviews on it.

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sorry, but it looks terrible. I spent about 3 seconds there...
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The bills background gives it a cheesy image and is really distracting. Beyond that, it seems cluttered. Also, there is something sketchy about only showing half of a face on the book covers- the same part of your face that would show if you were robbing a bank, for example. Check out some really good sales pages and try to copy those with better writing and fewer graphic elements.
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