My Capture Page

[Check-m]

I just got done editing my capture page, and need some reviews on it.

Prodigious Online Money Making Ecourse

[Dylan Phelan]

sorry, but it looks terrible. I spent about 3 seconds there...

[capforge]

The bills background gives it a cheesy image and is really distracting. Beyond that, it seems cluttered. Also, there is something sketchy about only showing half of a face on the book covers- the same part of your face that would show if you were robbing a bank, for example. Check out some really good sales pages and try to copy those with better writing and fewer graphic elements.

[kiranganta]

You need to work hard to keep the website nice