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Old 01-25-2008, 11:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Looking for feedback for my site

Hey Everyone,
I recently put up a website, with so-so results. I'm looking for some honest feedback on anything and everything for my site. Thanks!

Summit Climbing, LLC Building People To Climb Mountains - Home
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Old 01-26-2008, 12:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
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nice, simple design..
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Old 01-29-2008, 10:25 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you!
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Old 01-30-2008, 01:44 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Not bad, nice layout with the rock on the left side.
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Old 01-30-2008, 06:16 AM   #5 (permalink)
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i don't like it. not one bit. It makes me feel less ambitious because I don't climb. Shame on you. Kidding, it looks very nice. =)
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Old 02-02-2008, 04:45 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks everyone for the awesome comments!
Any advice on how to increase traffic to it?
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Old 02-02-2008, 06:11 PM   #7 (permalink)
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That is a nice basic website.... just a couple pointers.

I would like to see your telephone number emphasized more. It should probably go on the homepage for quick access for residual business. I would consider placing it on every page.


Try developing a creative logo with your business name. There are many graphic artists on guru.com or other freelance sites that will provide a decent logo for $50. This logo can also be used in your business cards.

Great starter site...
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Old 02-02-2008, 06:41 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Two Things

1) Please ... don't use center justification. It doesn't look right.
2) On your Tabs "About us" you should capitalize Us.

Aside from that - it's simple and nice. Make sure you have all your google key words in there to help you get traffic.
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Old 02-03-2008, 08:25 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Actually, Foodie is right. I didn't notice the center justification the first time I looked. Good call chica, buen trabajo.

Do you have hosting with a control panel? Not that it matters but in your line a photo gallery would be cool.
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Old 02-04-2008, 11:47 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Its simple and easy to use.
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Old 02-04-2008, 11:48 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Here's my 2 cents. I'm no expert but I do enjoy playing around.
1. Definitely agree with changing the justification from center to left.
2. The layout looks good.
3. I would make the box at the bottom that contains your copyright info the same width as the box above it.
4. The texture on the buttons are a little distracting to "me". This is a personal preference and my opinion only.
5. I do like the overall color scheme and the fact that the design is basic. I have the tendency to over do it on the design aspect myself.

In terms of traffic - again, not an expert. Mountain climbing is definitely a niche. It would probably serve you by making yourself an expert in the field. If you aren't already doing so begin writing articles. I usually advice that people write at least one article a week. Take those articles and post them to as many "reputable" article directories as you can. I would also recommend creating a place for people to signup for a newsletter. I would assume that people interested in your services will be interested in receiving periodic information related to the theme of your site.

Hope that helps.
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Old 02-04-2008, 12:29 PM   #12 (permalink)
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So, its been said that you about 10secs to get a visitor to stay on your site. Your landing page has nothing to pull vivstors in. Instead of saying "what we do" and hoping everyone reads that paragraph, put a question up there... "Want to Climb the Mountain to Success?" or something..
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