Lightyear Wireless personal website

**chrisblanks** · 03-25-2009 04:03 AM

Please review and give feed back. I created this site so I can make it easy for someone to remember the link and be able to send them to all the links from 1 page.

**fthom** · 03-25-2009 01:31 PM

I'm guessing you're meaning the link in your signature??
If so then here's my comments:

• What is the purpose of the website...your description didn't make it clear and neither does the website itself...

• It's all very bland, just text and some graphics...you really need to make a more graphical design.

• The layout is far too scattered, with no sense of order.

There's not much else to comment on from a design perspective, as there is little to the design!

**chrisblanks** · 03-25-2009 05:19 PM

Thanks for the comments. The purpose of the website is to get people to the correct links by just giving them 1 page website to go to. Its not to give them all the details about the business but a way to get more information. When I talk to people on a daily basis I want to get them to this site so they have an easy url to remember. I want to keep this site simple. I will take your suggestions and add a little more text to it so that they know what the purpose of the site is for.

Chris

**mhawthorn** · 03-26-2009 06:01 AM

I completely agree with fthom.

My only additional comment would be that the images that you have on the site are quite distorted. You need to make sure you resize them before uploading and keep the correct proportions for the width and height.

**chrisblanks** · 03-26-2009 08:46 PM

Originally Posted by mhawthorn

I completely agree with fthom.

My only additional comment would be that the images that you have on the site are quite distorted. You need to make sure you resize them before uploading and keep the correct proportions for the width and height.

Thanks mhawthorn for your feed back. I will look into it.