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Old 12-23-2007, 07:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 12-23-2007, 08:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Yeah, I dont mind it. Its to the point, and clean.

Overall, i think its good.
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Old 12-23-2007, 02:53 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Simple and serves its purpose. No point in making it more complex than is needed.
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Old 12-23-2007, 04:56 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 12-28-2007, 09:53 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Very nice, although the flash header is a bit lengthy.
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Old 12-29-2007, 07:00 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thank You for the comments.
Flash header is a bit lenghty?
To many pictures?
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Old 12-29-2007, 11:33 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Very sharp.. I like it
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Old 12-29-2007, 03:24 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Its nice and effective with very clean programming, two things to consider however, which version of flash you are using? it should be around 7 because 99% of everyone has that one but only around 90% have flash player 9 installed, so they may not view the banner all together - which would be bad because you phone number is on it. You can create a java script app which checks what flash version the use has and gives them an appropriate file. Also, the flash header takes to long to display the phone number, the number should be the first thing up - play the animations behind the header. Also consider th size of the flash banner, it should be under 20k if its not then some people may have to wait for a few sec especially older audiences that do not use the computer too much and may still be on a 56k modem (a lot of people still have modems so you shouldn't ignore them). Hope that helped.

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Old 12-29-2007, 09:03 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Clean design, well thought up, well presented and well coded. What more can I say! The size of the flash banner is fine at only 60k. You could just put the code in rather than inserting it with JS and I think a stand JPG with the end scene would work just as well for a flash alternative.
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Old 12-29-2007, 09:31 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Nice clean design, great job.
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Old 12-30-2007, 07:51 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Very nice and straight to the point.

Where did you design it?
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Old 01-01-2008, 05:43 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Nice - Simple - Clean Good work
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