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Old 01-14-2008, 04:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Could You Review My Website?

Hey everyone! I was wondering if you guys could review my website. I've updated it, and put in a banner.

It's to help people with internet marketing and making money online. I put in a members only page that you can only view if you sign up with my mailing list.

I was wondering if you guys could give me feedback and tell me what I should work on.

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I like the colors and layout, but it would be much more inviting if there were a couple pictures on the site. A picture says a thousand words. Use it to immediately portray the message of the site, and it will be easier for visitors to become interested and stay.
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Old 01-14-2008, 11:28 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Not a bad looking page.. has some life in it
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1. Like the color theme
2. Navigation or menu structure quite cool
3. Might want to use a target frame for your menu links - entire page reload occurs. You might want to keep the user with something to see while you load pages from links (slow connections)

Otherwise your website is cool - like it, great work.
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1. Each time I try to click on those run-off word, I can't. Might want to work on the navigation part
2. Add in picture, the main purpose for picture is to add color to your site and of cause to keep the the user re-focus on certain information.
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I think the site is very good. Like many other people have said the colour scheme is good, however i find it very difficult to read the writting on your homepage, if you made it bold it would be much easier to read.
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It looks ok to me. The best of luck with it.
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