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Old 04-26-2008, 09:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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check out my e-commerce site

Can anyone please check out my e-commerce site, all the products are not yet uploaded into my system but you can get a good idea.

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Old 04-27-2008, 05:24 AM   #2 (permalink)
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The site looks great, really organized. Sorry I dont have the expertise to give you advice, but I love how it looks!
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Old 04-27-2008, 01:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Clays Ferry Cycles is an ATV/MC performance and parts store located in the heart of the bluegrass state. We are dedicated to bringing our customers the very best parts for great prices, all while having a knowledgeable and experienced staff of technicians who can help you with any part related questions. We know ATVs because, unlike our competition, we are highly involved in this industry, and not only is this our job...it's our life! Feel free to contact us with any questions, and we will answer them personally and promptly.


I corrected this section a little bit as some grammar and spelling errors were present. If you want anymore help feel free to PM me.

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Old 04-27-2008, 02:00 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like the organization of the site and the loose feel it gives to the visitor. I found the Employee Info pretty funny also. The only thing that came to mind at first is the plainness of it. I'm not sure if that's a good word for these preferences, but that's what came to mind.
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Old 04-27-2008, 06:45 PM   #5 (permalink)
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lol! the employee section is under construction, thanks though! and you did a really great job Guy making the introduction sound alot better, I'm just working on moving lots of traffic to my site now!
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Old 04-28-2008, 07:01 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Not a problem...again feel free to PM me on content questions.

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Old 04-28-2008, 02:18 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Hello, just been through your site and it's looking good. I like the layout and the pictures of your products. Overall the site looks neat and easy to navigate. Hope I could see the final output of your site.
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Old 04-30-2008, 08:59 AM   #8 (permalink)
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good job...nice simple clean design. design reflects the product you are selling. keep up the good work.
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Old 04-30-2008, 09:33 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Can i ask a question please,why is it called claysferrycycle when it has nothing to do with cycles or bikes ??? I would have said clayferryatv or clayferryquads but there is no connection with cycles and that what bugs me.And also the url just states cycle.com and you always state cycles as in more than.
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Old 04-30-2008, 08:33 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Nice site, I might go just a tiny bit larger on the text size including the navbar because that color on a white background at your current size is a tiny bit small. Overall the design is great and the product layout is nice and organized.
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Old 04-30-2008, 08:40 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Your website has nice design, user friendly layout but I would suggest like the poster above that you increase the fonts little bit.

Start working on your Search Engine Optimization because I don't see any META tags and therefore your website is probably not in search engine rankings...
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Old 04-30-2008, 11:42 PM   #12 (permalink)
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mega b- we do atv and mc parts and accessories, but the bulk being atv...but i think the owner was just going for something catchy to reflect both atv and mc's...and I could see how cycles could be referred to both. As for the site name, well we are working on obtaining the name claysferrycycles.com, its kind of a l