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    TrafficFinder is offline Junior Member
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    Can you help me review my site?

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    I appreciate it. I am looking for any pointers. Is it easy to navigate, does it make since, any suggestions? I appreciate it.
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    do you also own Google Snatch - The FREE Click Formula

    If so you really need to change a lot on that site.

    anyways on you site inquestion. dont take any of this personally. ok.


    the site colors are terrible.

    needs better logo

    needs better layout. more css styling a MUST

    you are also trying to target the wrong 'meta keywords'. there is too much competition for the keywords you are going for. try using ones that not every web design and marketing company uses. this will help you get more rank.

    use a better 'meta description' also. stop repeating your web site name as much. search engine spiders dont like that too much. this can really screw up your ranking even for generate free web traffic. trust me.

    i hope you the best and keep up the work

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    Nothing personal about it, that's why I asked.

    Colors are terrible, what would you suggest? I personally liked the darker colors, to me it ads mystery and captures your attention, maybe mistaken, but please what would you suggest.

    Agreed, better logo a must, that was quick and had it done by another website. Do you have any suggestions on that either?

    Better layout: Please elaborate. Is it hard to get around in? Does it confuse the visitors? I like the constructive criticism. I have had 80 visitors in 2 days and 16 have requested the free video, and NOBODY has bought anything. I am looking for ways to improve.

    Thanks for your comments. Please keep them coming.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TrafficFinder View Post
    Nothing personal about it, that's why I asked.

    Colors are terrible, what would you suggest? I personally liked the darker colors, to me it ads mystery and captures your attention, maybe mistaken, but please what would you suggest.

    Agreed, better logo a must, that was quick and had it done by another website. Do you have any suggestions on that either?

    Better layout: Please elaborate. Is it hard to get around in? Does it confuse the visitors? I like the constructive criticism. I have had 80 visitors in 2 days and 16 have requested the free video, and NOBODY has bought anything. I am looking for ways to improve.

    Thanks for your comments. Please keep them coming.
    I hate sites that have so much text, that you have to sit there for an hour to read it, thats why i skim through, scroll all the way to the bottom, and look at the price (because there's always one)

    I think you should break it up into links, it is too much text for one to read.

    Colors and logo are awful, for this type of website you would want inviting colors, dark is hard on the eyes, and a professional site wouldn't hurt.

    i see you used pagemaker 2.0, i see where the look of cheap comes from.
    I think you should make you website look worth the $100.00 that you asking, especially since you "dropped" the price.

    Look, I can help you out with a design and a logo that will get you started. It's not free, but very cheap. Just PM me. I would also look into getting a better template.
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    P.S. i know you are trying to make a sell, but some of those pop-ups are VERY annoying and present themselves as scams (not saying this is one)
    1,000 business cards
    Full Color, Front and Back - no extra charge
    16pt (thickest available) UV Gloss or Flat, your choice - no extra charge

    $50.00 + Free Shipping anywhere in the U.S. - get this mailed directly to your home with tracking code.

    Payable by paypal only. You have to provide the graphics, or I can design you a business card with 2 revisions for $30.00.

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