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Old 05-20-2009, 06:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Californiacastle.com Urgent Review Needed

Hello guys,

i want you to review my site California Castle Resorts - Palm Springs Vacation Rental before its too late . Actually my contract with Designing company going to finish in next week So i want you to check my site and give me some suggestions . and tell me if i have some bugs , problems or some unnecessary things

Thank you so much
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Old 05-20-2009, 09:43 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Ghusa,

I breezed through it quickly

On the main page, do you think the number 1,000's or the word thousands, would be more effective?

Also you have an unnecessary dash in front of -property at the bottom

After Joshua Tree National Park do you think there should be a comma (,) before the sentence continues??

californiacastle.com/rent-castle

on this page, the 'click here for calendar' in underlined hyperlink looks amateurish compared to the rest of the site. Could you make it a nice looking button?

californiacastle.com/bedrooms

and after you click across the photos 9 times, it does a funny flash menu thing - do you think you could smooth this over?

All in all, it looks like a wonderful place, and you did a great job on the site
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