Bottleless Water Coolers - Blue Reserve

**bluereserve** · 02-04-2010 02:17 PM

New startup looking for feedback

We offer an economically and environmentally friendly alternative to bottled water coolers

**mtnjkwe** · 02-04-2010 02:38 PM

Can you be more descriptive about your product?
Have you got a website?

**Vindexus** · 02-04-2010 02:53 PM

The url: Bottleless Water Coolers - Blue Reserve (I'm guessing)

**Vindexus** · 02-04-2010 03:01 PM

I would change your home copy:

Blue Reserve is committed to offering businesses and homes an economical and eco-friendly alternative to bottled water coolers. Our bottleless cooler eliminates the cost and hassle of storing and replacing water jugs, by purifying water that is already in your building to bottled water quality. You can then enjoy unlimited pure water, cold or hot, keeping you refreshed and productive.

It's a tad long and you could really shorten it and make it more web friendly. Remember, people don't read on the web, they scan. I'd go with a list, maybe with some pretty pictures

Actually I just noticed you have a list at the bottom of your page. I'd make the bigger and more prominent. I'd also have title text or a link on BPA leaching, because I have no idea what that is.

You should also have a larger call to action button on your home page. The small link that says "Go bottleless - sign up for a free trial!" should definitely stand out more.

**bluereserve** · 02-05-2010 03:58 PM

Thanks for the feedback. The link for BPA leeching is a great idea and we will move forward with that soon.

In a nutshell, BPA is a chemical that leeches from plastic water bottles and has links to birth defects and other health problems.

**Encrypted** · 02-05-2010 05:20 PM

Your savings calculator wasn't working for me yesterday when I was messing with it. I'd definitely buy one of these if I had a use for it. lol

Slight edit.. It works, but only when 1 water cooler is selected from the options.