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Old 11-08-2007, 08:57 AM   #16 (permalink)
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A menu system would do wonders. Too much text. Otherwise this thing is loaded with content and should draw users in.
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Old 11-08-2007, 10:55 AM   #17 (permalink)
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1) site is too busy for the eyes. find a way to consolidate information
2) some links when clicked causes the entire frame to move to the right during transition and then move back.
3) see if you can shorten your info on landing page so that people do not have to scroll down for other info.


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Old 11-08-2007, 11:01 AM   #18 (permalink)
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First off

Its very crowded, I dont know where to look,
Secondly, the font is really bad (try using arial, about 12pt's)

and you say about getting to the top of google etc, you need a professional Search Engine Optimization'er (I am one!) you need a Simple and Easy to use Standards Complient CSS driven website, with all meta tags including Keywords, Description etc

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Old 11-08-2007, 12:34 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Thanks for the tips everybody

I'm not a web designer (obviously), but I think I have something here, I know what I want it to look like in my head and what I want it to do...I have done my best to try and create that but I'm obviously lacking some of the expertise that some of you already have with things such as CSS and such.... how to make it more browser friendly, etc...

Can somebody please let me know how difficult it would be, or point me in the direction as far as books or online information on creating databases... I feel that's one of the things this site needs, I would like to make the "hotels" and "nightclubs", as well as "resturants", etc... searchable... that would allow me to get rid of a lot of the "crowded" look and feel of the site... as well as make it more user friendly....

To pjb2u, thanks for info on optimization, I will start to look into search engine placement once the site is up to where I want it to be....

Thanks as always to all of you for your constructive criticism...

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