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Old 01-18-2008, 07:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A Site I did

check out this site that i did for a friend
RicheCredit.com - Home
tell me what u think..
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Old 01-20-2008, 03:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks clean and professional, with just the right amount of clinicalness. Not really much to improve on except the horrible stock images that you have going on. It looks like you have combined lots of different images of people with crossed arms into one, but the lighting on each of them doesn't match up.

But not a bad looking site.
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Old 01-20-2008, 10:41 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Fix the image looks blurry, spell check the first page, "contact us" page put an image in there where it says sample image - just a couple things of the bat.
Other then that looks clean.
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Old 01-20-2008, 12:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Looks great, besides the image comment, also the JPG image of the bubble text which says "Get solid business credit now" is a little low quality (can be seen with good quality LCD monitors). Try setting the quality of the JPG image higher.
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Old 01-20-2008, 01:44 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanx a million
on teh image with the peopel with teh crossed arms?
it came blurry
bought it at dreamstime
other than that
iw ill do my best to fix everything
thanx again
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Old 01-20-2008, 01:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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hi . like it

its a very professional looking site. i like it appart from the image which makes my eyes hurt.

but its a good tidy site. like it
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Old 01-20-2008, 04:46 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Looks good overall. I would add a little padding around the text and between items, they seem to kind of run together.
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Old 01-20-2008, 08:31 PM   #8 (permalink)
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1. Very good site, clean and simple.
2. Move the thing on the header to the footer. You are already for the home and contact us button on the top, after scrolling all the way to the bottom it be good to have those link from the top at the bottom so your visitor don't need to scroll to the top again.
3. Change the wording on the center from management to a testimonial from a user or several testimonial which will be much much more useful for your marketing purposes.
4. And make that search word visible please.

Overall another good website
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