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Old 01-24-2008, 01:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Started my newest internet company today!

Hey guys not been around here for a while and it seems it has grown so much while ive been away.Great to be back though.

Launched this website two weeks ago had good traffic and good feedback as well.Hope you can add to it.
So basically my new website is Brand I.D Design i can sense this one is going to be really successful guys and girls.Ive been open two weeks and already completed three projects
Anyway heres the deal,to rebuild my portfolio im offering a 75 % discount on my services for all young entrepreneur clients.So Dont be afraid to get a quote and in the message enter the code Young coup.Ill get back to you with the original quote and your quote (obviously 25% of the original).Then you choose weather to carry on with proceedings.I guarentee high quality work delivered fast and as our guarentee says we wont stop working until you are happy.Hope you take up my offer,if not then thats fine.
Dont be afraid to contact me.
Or please just pm me for a quote
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Old 01-24-2008, 03:38 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like your website and its ease of use, but you should proofread it a little bit ;-)
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Old 01-25-2008, 08:45 AM   #3 (permalink)
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start with the contac link =)
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Old 02-01-2008, 12:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks for the feeback guys
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Old 02-01-2008, 02:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
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liking your site. But what makes you think this will be successful ?
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Old 02-01-2008, 02:25 PM   #6 (permalink)
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on your testimonials page it redirected me to a porn page. Im not happy. Change the link
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Old 02-01-2008, 10:02 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Very nice...congratulations.
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Old 02-05-2008, 01:54 PM   #8 (permalink)
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You have numerous grammatical errors that need to be addressed. Personally, I don't think it is written very well. The website does look nice however. Best of luck to you!
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Old 02-05-2008, 02:59 PM   #9 (permalink)
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How do you plan to promote your site and services? What sets your business apart from the rest?
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Old 02-05-2008, 07:11 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Uh..the site doesn't like that nice....

1) Your logo is just plain old text that isn't even done really nicely
2) Your www address has a horrible 1995 gradient on it
3) Same with that business card...Even moreso with your menu, it's horribly done
4) Your footer is way too large for that little info...Find a way to condense the info and get rid of the HUGE gradients!
5) You also do realize that the only other page that works other than the front page, is the contact page....

So overall, I'm not impressed especially since I can't even see your portfolio! I don't want to judge your skills just based upon your one site I've seen... There's a ton of potential improvements there! You should make some changes.

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Old 03-15-2008, 07:34 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Uh..the site doesn't like that nice....

1) Your logo is just plain old text that isn't even done really nicely
2) Your www address has a horrible 1995 gradient on it
3) Same with that business card...Even moreso with your menu, it's horribly done
4) Your footer is way too large for that little info...Find a way to condense the info and get rid of the HUGE gradients!
5) You also do realize that the only other page that works other than the front page, is the contact page....

So overall, I'm not impressed especially since I can't even see your portfolio! I don't want to judge your skills just based upon your one site I've seen... There's a ton of potential improvements there! You should make some changes.

Eric Huang
I totally agree with these comments....did you all just look at the front page? None of his other links work!
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Old 03-15-2008, 08:48 PM   #12 (permalink)