entrpreneurs & marketers needed

**Kevin Thompson** · 02-25-2004 03:18 PM

I have found a six year old company that will advertize on TV and radio and give us the customers.We make immediate commissions ($15-$300 paid next week!) as well as building residual income streams off of repeat customers commissions. NO SELLING ..ever! Seriously.

We are looking for entrepreneurial people to join our team.Also looking for someone with site building experience to make cash setting up sites.

I have previously owned businesses such as a Subway franchise and small marketing businesses.This is the best opportunity I have ever seen period.

No "get rich quickers" please...we need quality people who want to take this to a massive level.There is almost no competition....yet, so hurry!.

See it for yourself and make up your own mind.We have heavily researched this company and expect you to do the same.

Good luck and see you soon.

kevin@cashinontrim.com for details,questions and more info how we are making money.

**Onyx** · 02-25-2004 07:22 PM

I can't really say whether what you have to offer is worth it or not. That's because I fell asleep after the first paragraph! Seriously - that was just marketing hype from start to finish.

I'm open to any network marketing scheme that can make me money with little effort, but I'm afraid that was far to much to read.

Simplify your mission statement and outline what is really in it for te investor. If you can't do that in two sentences then I think you're flogging a dead horse!

**Green Frog** · 02-25-2004 08:59 PM

My two questions are 1. what is a gold gem?? isn't gold a metal??

and

2. how do you gaurantee something 1000% percent?

After that I lost interest as well.

**Kevin Thompson** · 02-25-2004 10:21 PM

Thanks Onyx, I hear ya..kind of felt it was long winded myself. It's just such an interesting new strategy that I keep feeling like I should describe the whole program.But you're right,I don't think I'd stop to read that.
Maybe I should just say something like fresh new idea in MLM,no selling involved ,many ways to earn residual income streams.....and just leave it at that.

I really believe that this will sell itself if it is understood (I have years of MLM experience and have studied many of these things and this really is the best I've seen.)

Tough way to make an easy living!!

Thanks for the input though...

**Onyx** · 02-26-2004 02:26 PM

Hi Kevin.

It sure is long-winded. Just tried to read it again!

You say that you've had a lot of experience with MLM and this one will seell itself if it is understood. Well there ya go! We all know what an MLM opportunity is and most of us are sceptical about them, so tell us what's different about this one and let it sell itself.

We don't need to know how it could make us $2000/week or anything like that. Those sorts of phrases put me right off! Tell me what I need to do - in a short paragraph - and how the scheme works.

If you're serious about this and it's earning you a living then I would strongly recommend that you pay a decent copy writer. You'd be amzed how putting the right words on a page can increase sales dramatically!

P.S. You're mixing those metaphors again. How can you have a 'tough way to make an easy living'?

**Kevin Thompson** · 03-04-2004 07:10 PM

Hi Onyx

Well,admittedly, it still needs work but I've edited out all the fluff and some of the details that are easily provided later.

The goal is just to get people to take a look and see for themselves.

What do you think?

Thanks
Kevin

**Onyx** · 03-04-2004 07:29 PM

Looking much better, but it's still not grabbing me personally. I dunno - perhaps different people like to read different things. I did a quick search on Trim and found the following page, which got me much more interested as I could understand what the product is (weight loss), how the business model works (buy shares in customers and receive instant profit as well as all future commission) and whether there are any catches (didn't see anything I didn't like).

http://www.home-base-business-adviso...rnational.html - for those interested.

It does look like a good scheme, but I don't have the cash to invest at the mo and being across the pond in the UK always appears to put you at a disadvantage with most of these programmes.

Can you explain more about the web development aspect as there are a lot of web designers on this board.

**Kevin Thompson** · 03-04-2004 07:44 PM

That site is run by a member of our company in a different line than me.(my competition..hehe)
It's a little misleading but I don't think he did it intentionally to fool people but rather to find leads. He is actually a really good guy.

But yes, again I am missing the point a little and will not re-edit until I put some thought into it.

Thanks once again for your input...I really appreciate it!

Kevin

www.cashinontrim.com/prospect.htm

**Kevin Thompson** · 03-04-2004 07:48 PM

ooops..re:web designers

Well, as new members continue to come on board, we are having difficulty getting their sites up quickly.

We supply all the necessary information (domain,host,url,email addy etc) and are looking for someone to simply put up sites similair to mine for a flat rate.It would help if they were in our organization but this isn't absolutely necessary.

Does this clear it up a bit?

Thanks Onyx!

Kevin

**tri00** · 04-03-2004 03:03 PM

I took a look at your site and if you are still looking for web designer; we, at The Praktis, will definitely be able to help you.
---Especially since you have the hosting information and everything already set up.

Our site is very personable, so just take a look through to get an idea of our ability to design. You can contact us if you would like to see samples of the work that we did for some of our clients.

-------------------
Utrualia Perkins

www.thepraktis.com

**e_commerceagency** · 04-08-2004 11:05 PM

Hello,

I am new to these boards but I really like the open atomsphere and the frank attitude.

Is this product you speak of actually legit?

Provide details in a clear way on how you are actually getting paid.

I have researched these style of companies for a long time and they all seem to become counterproductive, have you made any money doing this???????

Thanks,

KJF

**Kevin Thompson** · 04-08-2004 11:32 PM

Hello E-commerce.

E-mail me and I'll be glad to.

It most definitely is real and if you're looking for an easily duplicatable, turn key opportunity with a new company, I think you'll love the marketing strategy.

I hope to hear from you.

I'll send you a link to my new site. We are having great success with it.

Sincerely,

Kevin Thompson

**e_commerceagency** · 04-08-2004 11:34 PM

But how much have you made in your pocket??????

KJF

**Kevin Thompson** · 04-08-2004 11:40 PM

Hello

I promise to be upfront and honest with you but...

Income projections and such on a forum are taboo.
If you are serious and e-mail me, I'll answer your questions promptly.

Thanks

Kevin