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    alexeir is offline Junior Member
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    Please check my website!

    I decided to create a special accounting software for trading companies and had registered the site www.alexeir.com where you can
    find the description for this product. English is not my native lanquage and I have no friends at USA or England to check the grammar or text understanding at foreign person side. Site is small and has only product and company description. All your remarks,advices,improvements about text at this site will be very very valuable for me.Is everything clear at this site? Is it easy to understand what does this software and business engine do? Please
    check it for any lexical,grammatical or any other kind of errors.

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    I'm not going to get into the actual industry/operations of the site, I've just looked at the design layout of the site, and it looks nice, just check the spelling. That is; on your logo, you've got it "...For You Business", it should actually say "...For Your Business".

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    Quote Originally Posted by usakos View Post
    just check the spelling. That is; on your logo, you've got it "...For You Business", it should actually say "...For Your Business".
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