Not so good at marketing, Need your help!!

[Home-Flip.com]

Hello,

My name is Julie and I am not so good at writing a sales pitch. I was wondering if you all could help me. Check out www.onedollareducation.com and tell me what you think? I am possibly looking for someone to help me write a good sales article. If you could offer some insight as to how I should go about writing the sales article, I would really appreciate it.

[bucnutz19]

Hello. I am very good at sales and could possibly come up with a very good sales pitch but I guess I am not really sure what you are trying to sell? If it is simply just for donation then writing a sales pitch for it will be extremely difficult.

[Home-Flip.com]

yes, basically all I need is 112,000 people to donate $1. Once my education is paid off I plan to use a portion of the funds to donate to other graduates in need.

[Nigami Enterprise]

Honestly i think you are going to have to be a bit more creative with your idea. I don’t think you will strike the symphony note with to many people. Firstly who are you trying to target to pay the dollar? You have people out there who either payed for there own education or who decided not to get an education and worked for there money. You have to ask yourself why would they give you a dollar then aim your site at that cause at the moment I don’t think you will get more then $50.

Anyway best of luck with it Mick

[bucnutz19]

I agree I think the general idea is a good one but you might have to tweak a few things to make this project really take off. Look at ways to provide some more value to the people donating. I know its difficult because your only asking for a dollar but there has to be some way that you can increase your donations.

[akula]

sales pitches have 2 basic components; features and benefits

your current pitch neither has attractive features, nor does it articulate compelling benefits