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    dfernanda is offline Junior Member
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    Branding Test

    Hi all!

    I am building a brand and I am testing the demographics. I intended to target working adults thinking that many people would like to try outdoor sports and activities but feel like they can't. (they wear the clothes but don't play the sport)

    http://www.playground-earth.com/test/index.htm Test page: Not all links work. Please look at the image scroll in the center of the page.

    This is a test page (not a working page and just trying to get hits) with images and a few tag lines that I would like to test.

    What do you this about changing "travel to play" to "This is my life" or "life is happening" ?

    Any ideas, suggestions, questions, critiques, feedback are welcome.

    Thank you very much!!

    Fernanda
    Solo ownwer
    Playground Earth

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    Unreal030 is offline Senior Member
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    looks good at first glance. not easily noticeable errors, but its late so I am a bit out of it, I will look at this again tomorrow. Only thing I see that you may want to change (but it may just be me, see what others think here about it before changing it) is on the activities tab just list them as biking/golfing/etc. All of them saying vacations just seems monotonous. Once again it may just be because I am tired though.

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