All around critique for my newest project

[MpyreDzirez]

This site means quite a bit to me, as it is something I struggled with for years. It is essential that the design, adsense placement, pitch, and SEO all be at the best they could be.

I am determined to turn the worst thing in my life into the best thing of my life.

So I am asking for an all around site critque on every aspect of web development. www.newanxietycure.com

If you would like to receive a free copy, pm me. I will pick only one trusted person. the stipulation is you have to order a copy and then I will immediately refund your purchase. This, obviously is to test the delivery.

I LOVE YE!

[4-Knots]

well I like the content of your site. I think that skype me feature is fantastic. Gives direct contact to the seller. Thank God you didn't do a long sales letter and I think your first opener is a classic. Its good.

Your site is slightly narrow. Kind of like a blog. Plus theres a slight scoll, u couldn't get rid of that could u? Design wise its decent. font changes in size are slightly off putting. can u explain the 400% money back guarantee?

all in thumbs up.

[noname]

Take the "help me support my family" out of it. I read til there then thought oooh, is this for real. It makes it sound really bad when u have to play the "I really need ur support" card. Plus customers don't have any pity, they only care about what benefits them.

Otherwise the site is A1.

[Nigami Enterprise]

Great site maybe have the buy now button a little bigger or have another one on the site somewhere.

[MpyreDzirez]

the 400% money back gaurantee is what it is. The price of the report is 14.95 and if you're dissatisfied I give you back $60. I do have measures in place to protect against abuse of that though. you are right about the help my family card. its overdosing

Anyone with any SEO expertise wanna chime in and tell me how I'm doing there?

also I do not know what you mean be a slight scoll?