5 minute business plan pitch

[S4C]

I am competing in a business plan competition and have to give a 5 minute pitch where I present my idea to the judges. It's for money so I want to get it right.

They already received my proposal and I am not allowed to distribute written material during the pitch.

Here are the issues I wanted to address during the pitch:

What is the problem I am going to solve / what is the purpose of this venture?
What are my goals and how will I achieve them?
What market am I in and how big is it, $?
What/ who is my target market?

Am I on the right track, this is the first time I'm doing something like these, any advice is highly appreciated.

max

[rogercbryan]

Max,

Why don't you post your speech on here... there are a lot of smart people who can go over it and show you what you need to change....

[S4C]

This sounds a little paranoid but competition might be reading it, i'll send it in a pn at most.

but thanks for the tip, what are some big do and don'ts during a business pitch? If it's possible to generalize it?

[rogercbryan]

In 5 min... I have no idea... my proposals are usually 30 min.. with an other 1.5 hours for discussion... you didnt even say what type of business it is... its hard to help you with out some basic information.