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    Need help creating a better title

    Hi folks,
    Over the weekend I posted an add in the classified section entitled "How do you pull together enough capital for your start-up?"

    Well, apparently that title didn't work because to date it has only 26 views and no replies.

    Any suggestions on a title that folks are more likely to click?

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    It might be a little wordy for the classifieds. Try something like: Capitalize Your Start-Up! or Get Start-Up Capital!

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    You could also try Capital, what every business needs and how to get yours or Start off right with your capital. you can also add a teaser like top 5 mistakes people make with capital and how to avoid them. Hope this helps and best of luck!
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    Try "Trouble Finding Start-up Cash? Proven Method To Raise Capital Fast."

    BTW, 26 views and no clicks is not uncommon. Assume only .5% will actually click if viewed. Yes, .5%. that's 1 click every 200 views. The best way to improve that number is to change up and test new ad structures.
    Last edited by nonrate; 05-18-2009 at 09:03 PM.

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    How about something simple like - "business start up..."

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