Need help creating a better title

**JKProsperity** · 05-14-2009 07:19 PM

Hi folks,
Over the weekend I posted an add in the classified section entitled "How do you pull together enough capital for your start-up?"

Well, apparently that title didn't work because to date it has only 26 views and no replies.

Any suggestions on a title that folks are more likely to click?

**BBlackwood** · 05-18-2009 03:50 PM

It might be a little wordy for the classifieds. Try something like: Capitalize Your Start-Up! or Get Start-Up Capital!

**Chris Brooks** · 05-18-2009 05:31 PM

You could also try Capital, what every business needs and how to get yours or Start off right with your capital. you can also add a teaser like top 5 mistakes people make with capital and how to avoid them. Hope this helps and best of luck!

**nonrate** · 05-18-2009 09:01 PM

Try "Trouble Finding Start-up Cash? Proven Method To Raise Capital Fast."

BTW, 26 views and no clicks is not uncommon. Assume only .5% will actually click if viewed. Yes, .5%. that's 1 click every 200 views. The best way to improve that number is to change up and test new ad structures.