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Old 02-07-2007, 03:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Website Review: Please comment

Hi guys,

A relative of mine who owns a construction company commissioned me to redesign his firm's website. Yes, I admit I used a WYSIWYG editor (obvious in the source code), but also tweaked it using some manual coding (js), and light custom graphics work, and encoded that complementary background music using a multiple bit rate format (wma).

Please review and comment it: http://cdalleninc.com/nickersonhomes.

Again, I do not claim to be web designer, just doing a favor (getting compensated though) for a relative.

Thank for your comments!
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Old 02-07-2007, 03:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Its nice, the text is just kind of hard to read and the links dont work.
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Old 02-07-2007, 04:10 PM   #3 (permalink)
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change the font and you should be good.
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Old 02-07-2007, 06:24 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Again, the font doesn't look good (no bold!). Other than that, I'm truly impressed!

EDIT: P.S. And nobody cares how you built the site, as long as it works and displays Ok in their browser. So don't worry about that!
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Old 02-08-2007, 09:22 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks guys for your comments! However, something rather strange happened this morning. I called my relative this morning (Robert) and I asked him how he liked the new design, he informed me that he liked the original design better. I could not believe my ears! Here's the design I did back in 2005, and what a piece of crap it was: http://nickersonhomes.com/2005/

Can anyone explain this? I was so shocked to him say that. Anyway, I told him I would update the original design.
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Old 02-08-2007, 09:24 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Nice new site, way better then the old...
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Old 02-08-2007, 10:43 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Hi - A nice improvement... good work. However... a little suggestion; I'd recommend that the links (Contact Us/Portfolio etc...) were not Javascript Pop Up windows. I think it would be best to just link to a page on the site without opening a new one. Just an idea
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Old 02-09-2007, 05:45 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanks guys - I would make the font changes, but he doesn't like the new design, but the old one instead.

Geez, I am so upset about this - I worked so hard on the new design.
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Old 02-09-2007, 05:50 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Hi - Perhaps tell him to read this forum
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Old 02-09-2007, 10:49 AM   #10 (permalink)
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New site took a long time to load... links still don't work... people with sensitive eyes like mine find the font blurred and blazing at the same time...

I do like the new site better... It looks more professional and simpler than the old one... and considering your target market, I think the new one is much more suitable to their tastes...

if reading this thread does not work on your relative, give him a long lecture about targeting customers and the concept of marketing...
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Old 02-09-2007, 11:44 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Quote:
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New site took a long time to load... links still don't work...
Are you sure? The largest item on that home page is the jpeg image of the house - and it's only 22KB large.

Same for links - haven't had anyone say they're not working yet...

I went to his office today to resolve his web hosting account - I've done a modification of the original design. I'll post the link later - I think it looks just as good.
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Old 02-09-2007, 02:40 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Okay, here's the new site: http://cdalleninc.com/nickersonhomes_versionB/

I don't really like this one any better.
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