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Old 08-01-2006, 06:18 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Site critique:
Please critique my site! It's a free natural acne treatment guide http://www.acneisdead.com

References will come, new videos too, probably more graphics as well.
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Old 08-01-2006, 11:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Its ok, dont get me wrong, but I definately think it could use some good graphics, maybe in the header. If you dont have the money, I would recommend downloading the 30-day trials of Photoshop and Dreamweaver, they are located at Adobe.com and can definatley help you out.
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Old 08-02-2006, 10:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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True, very true.
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Old 08-02-2006, 01:38 PM   #4 (permalink)
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One thing thats kind of minor is that your forum has a different template than your main site. Not a big issue, but if your really looking for something to improve. I'm not so sure how hard that is to change. If it takes days I definately wouldn't bother with it.

You could use more pictures as mentioned above. This is always much harder than it seems at first though - for me at least. You can easily spend lots of time in photshop and paint messing with images.

It looks pretty good though. You have a decent amount of text which is good sicne it fills the pages.
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Old 08-02-2006, 01:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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need to work really hard on your website ...
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Old 08-03-2006, 12:50 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Its ok, but there can be a lot of improvement
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Old 08-03-2006, 04:09 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Could definetely use some spice. Consider getting a banner that says what the plain text says. Maybe faces of happy acne free people smiling? Be creative.

Take a look at the banner I have on my blog - It really sets it off: www.ThePoetryBlog.com
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Old 08-03-2006, 08:11 AM   #8 (permalink)
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The content is great- it's just the design as everyone has already stated. Maybe a nice header and variation in colors...
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Old 08-03-2006, 09:18 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Your site has a nice form and layout.

Just needs some more color and some pics to add some character.

Hang in there.

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Old 08-06-2006, 07:31 PM   #10 (permalink)
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If you would like a logo done - I have a friend who might be interested in doing it for some advertising on your website (he's just completed my new logos which will be up in the next couple of weeks YAY!)

Also, I recommend going to yotophoto.com and getting some pictures of happy smiling people for your header. yotophoto helps you find the free pics that you can use without creditation, etc.

I also think that the links on the left hand side should be put into a box with a black surround -- just to clearly show they are a seperate section to the middle part. Maybe even a bullet or similar infront of each link aswell

"Enter Acne Free Guide => " Make it bigger and stand out more! People love free guides and stuff -- especially on something as horrible as acne -- so be more bold with what you are going to give THEM for nothing.

One last thing.. I would also suggest a "Contact Us" page. So if there is something they can't find on the site, they can contact you for more information

Oh oh! Even.. a newsletter so if new information is added to the site.

The ideas just keep coming.. haha!!

If you need any help with the stuff I've mentioned, be sure to send me an email or MSN msg amieetheridge@hotmail.com and I'd be happy to do a bit of a deal so I can help you (No cost involved)

Cheers and hope I've been of some help!
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Old 08-06-2006, 07:32 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Oh...and one LAST LAST thing...

Step 1 isn't clickable... hrmm ??

Cheers,
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Old 08-06-2006, 07:34 PM   #12 (permalink)
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actually.. I was incorrect. This is the last thing...

The "Send this page to a friend" isn't working. Just takes them back to the front page...

Cheers,
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