[I-c-da$]

I finished most of my website today. Welcome to the Frontpage its a joomla webdesign and management company all of the content is self writen and I havent quite figured out the services pricing yet. If anyone has any feedback or would be interested in working on this project with me drop me a PM.

All critizism welcomed even the wevil ones :P

[HarveyJ]

Well, if you're offering webdesign services, I'd say scrap the design of that completely.
It doesn't inspire any positive emotional reaction from me, and most people that can't get design done on their own will be the sort to work on "a feeling".

I'd recommend a LOt of white, and some blue in there as it's a colour that inspires confidence or calm, depending on the saturation level.
The site also looks very flat, as in 2 dimensional. Have a few things with bevelling/embossing, maybe some reflections... at the very least some highlight and shadow. It needs a bit of depth.

Maybe 5-6 years ago, a design like that would have worked, but thanks to the visuals behind Vista and OS-X, everything needs to be round corners and reflections now, or it looks dated.

[I-c-da$]

LOL, Thank you exactly the kind of feedback I was looking for hahaha. Im changing the colors and layout a bit and will try to get some flash ads on there for my own services. Thank you HarveyJ gimme some more if you got some :P

[JLeezer]

Also, I'd copy all of your text to a word processor and run some serious spell check on it. There might be a few mistakes that it won't catch where you've used a different word than was meant, but most of the typos are actually nonexistent words.

[mattnelson]

professionall on the homepage should be professional and Online doesnt need a capital really.

[I-c-da$]

Bleh Yeah my original language is german so my english sucks a bit. Ill use word to spell check thw whole thing :P gosh I love this communtity :P Keep it comin ideas for services are also welcomed.

[JLeezer]

Originally Posted by I-c-da$

Bleh Yeah my original language is german so my english sucks a bit. Ill use word to spell check thw whole thing :P gosh I love this communtity :P Keep it comin ideas for services are also welcomed.

Totally understandable. I know that I've become somewhat ignorant to the fact that while others may know English, it is not necessarily their natural language. I'd be happy to run through and do a quick check of anything I don't think will be caught by spellcheck. I'll send over a copy later today.

[I-c-da$]

Thank you allot I looked at your websites a bit and I have to say great work your doing there.

[warrensway]

Maybe a few more details content, and yes grammar as well as spell check.

[I-c-da$]

So whats is your guys opinion of how sales will be ?

[crackah]

Terrible, Probably 0.

The site is bad. Its boring, plane and its probably just a template you bought from a website.

[0Googler0]

I don't hate the overall appearance of the webpage, but I don't think it is right for what you are doing. This design is more commonly used when information is more important than the look. Also there is fairly small think that sort of bugs me. On your homepage your title should be the name of your business or related to it; not "Welcome to the Frontpage."