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Old 03-16-2007, 02:49 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I just launched my new affiliate site! The url is www.2easyshopping.com
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Old 03-16-2007, 04:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Is this the site your praised lady web designer built for you?
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Old 03-16-2007, 04:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I could of built a better website with my eyes closed. I could of made a better website with a garbage web builder.
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Old 03-19-2007, 03:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
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What could make it better?
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Old 03-19-2007, 04:00 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I don't understand what the website it. When someone visits your website, they should immediately understand what it is.
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Old 03-19-2007, 04:39 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Jewelry not "Jewellery". I'm amazed you spelt accessories correctly... I'm not sure what your site is trying to solve.
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Old 03-19-2007, 05:01 PM   #7 (permalink)
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A whole new layout to start with. Once you've done that come talk to me on how to make it better.
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Old 03-19-2007, 06:33 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Wow.

First thing is you website alignment is all messed up, either center the site or make it wider. It is currently only taking up the left half of my scree on 1024 res.

Second thing, change your whole color scheme.

Third thing, Start all over from scratch and possibly hire a pro to do it for you.

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Old 03-19-2007, 08:36 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Don't listen to the above criticism. Instead, ask your target audience what they think of the website, then make modifications. If you make modifications until everyone on here is happy, it will ruin your chances of success. There are more important aspects to a sucessful website than the appearance.
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Old 03-19-2007, 09:13 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Read some business books and get your wits about ya first buddy, then try to make a go at it.
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Old 03-20-2007, 07:17 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Jewelry is not spelled wrong, it is spelled with two l's in Canada. Also, it seems that everyone here criticizing me is trying to offer me their design services.
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Old 03-20-2007, 07:47 AM   #12 (permalink)
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RLorenzen,

I am non-bias and I also think you need a new look. It just does not look professional to me. I personally would not buy from you. But, like mxer210 said, you need to ask your targeted audience. Pehaps, they will preceive a good deal because you spend more time on the product and services rather than the website???

I have the same problem as you with my site. A lot of criticisms. So, I am as well seeking a designer to help me with my site as we speak.

Good Luck to you.
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Old 03-20-2007, 03:22 PM   #13 (permalink)