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Old 08-01-2006, 10:08 PM   #16 (permalink)
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hey it's my first attempt, I expected to take a beating from you experts lol

it's getting better though, I'm making alot of changes
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I just scrolled down your site without reading the sales letter. IMHO, the font is quite big and not centralized. Better if you can change or modify the template with the neat and nice one.
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i would mix the testimonials throughout the page, so it builds up trust in the potential customer is reading the sales copy
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well... thanks for being brutaly honest guys. lol

looks like i still got alot of work to do, better to hear it from you guys instead of putting it out there and not getting any sales.

kanthony39us, you mentioned good meta tags, could you elaborate? im still really new to building websites so be patient with me : )

anybody have any suggestions that would make it better?
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