[Creadiv]

Hey everyone,

I just wrote my first short story about disgruntled guy the cartoon version of myself working in IT for my Dad's company. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to check it out and let me know what you thought of it. My goal is to put together a group of these stories and to try to compile them in a book and publish it.

I look forward to hearing your thoughts.

Adam

It is the first post on my blog right now so the link in my signature will take you right to it.

[chaunna]

hey adam... just read ur disgruntled guy comic.. its great
i always wanted to create my own comics of my worklife... but
never had the comp skills to make it online and to share handdrawn
comics isnt as easy

only suggestion is to create an image for the most graphic part of the story.
i would have liked to have seen.. calling for tech support,, stressed tech support
guy with peon employee... opps i forgot to mention i spilled tea...and then ur
keyboard around the neck in a thought bubble... u dunno..

anyways...looking forward to the next one

[clp11479]

the graphics need some work and you need more graphics. they dont have to be great drawing, but they have to be unique with some identity (like how Dilbert is nothing fancy, but it sticks in your head as unique)

[Creadiv]

Thanks for the reviews guys. I am defintely working on both the stories and the graphics for the future. I just really wanted to get this first one done.

Looking forward to writing more.