Wristroom.com?

[Denis3721]

hello entrepreneurs! hi i just finished my site... wristroom.com I was just wondering if anyone could browse through the site real quick and tell me if they like it. It took me a while to get the design together. The hardest part is getting the content.

Briefly describe what you like on the site and what you don't like. I would appreciate your help. I would love some suggestions, because im kind of out of ideas...

I personally like the look of my site. I consider myself a good web site developer. So if you need a good looking dynamic site. Gimmie a PM! Thanx

[akula]

ok..here's my impression after 30 secs

1) it's a blog..so what? who is the author? is he an authority?
nope...can't find the name or the resume..close window

2) clicked "about us" page..seems the site is offering some kind of software for web developers. am I a web developer? no..close window

that's what went through my head
hope it helps

[richkid]

I had trouble working out where to look. It was hard to distinguish between the main content and the side bar.

[freedom.project]

I went through you about page and this is what I found.

You intro on your about page is assuming to much about your readers.

Contact is UNPROFESSIONAL

You should also add more details on you about page

1. history
2. founder
3. etc.

Your about page also seems like you sell products for web developers.

Also, what does Movies, PC games, and Southpark have to do with "survive as a web developer on the internet."

[Allurre]

Yes, the side bar + ads really makes it hard to concentrate on the purpose of the site.

[allysa]

what is you site is all about? software and online tools, right? I've seen a movie ad on your post.

site looks simple, maybe add some colors or a background color to enhance your site design. All the best!

[deep_impression777]

It has a really large sidebar, but the clear and crisp scheme works for me. I like your header/logo but my attention to it was kind of sucked by your equally-sized ad.

Try working more on hooking your viewers to it by easy to read content, saying who you are and what are you here for.

[Denis3721]

hello! Thank you for the reviews! I now see that I have to make some modifications on the site. I will modify the about us page to clearly state what the site is about. But I honestly didn't think people would click on the "about us" link anyway. Guess I was wrong. Well if anyone is wondering what the site is about, it basically a free downloads site...

I will be back here again after I fix the site up. Once again thank you! You guys a life savers.