With your help I'm Finally Done (I think)

**Mojobaabby** · 10-28-2007 06:00 PM

Ok it's done...My dining site is complete and I am about to start my local marketing. I have done a press release that will go out to all local radio, and newspapers. I have purchased space on a web page for one month that receives 6,000,000 hits per month. I have mailed out an introduction to all of the restaurants in the directory and I have hired a person to do follow up calls. I have ordered door stickers to put in restaurants.
Did I miss anything??
Need you help if you have any.
Ontario Restaurants Your Guide to dining out in Ontario

**dreamer4ever** · 10-29-2007 04:08 AM

Hey not to rag on you I know you said your site was finished but I would reccomed putting more pictures in and bolding the font to the left. I like the color scheme though, and the grapes that droop down. Well good luck and make it happen

**Creadiv** · 10-29-2007 07:34 AM

The google ads mixed with the BOLDED Save You Money text just makes the site seem a bit cheesy. Other than that I think it looks pretty good. Good luck.

**Mojobaabby** · 10-29-2007 08:03 AM

Valid points so far...keep them coming. I knew there was a reason I joined here.

**chrishorsley13** · 10-29-2007 02:26 PM

definatly bold the left side words, or change the color on the buttons on the left, good luck with your new venture

**exstatic** · 10-29-2007 06:34 PM

Its too green, too much writing I got bored and closed the site within 5 seconds..

You need to be able to engage your visitor in the first 5 secs..

The site is called Ontario Dining guide, wheres the guide? I click choose a city, and then dont know what to do...?

**zoobie** · 10-29-2007 08:33 PM

I thin I'm with exstatic about the kind of green you're using. Making it lighter would make a viewer stay longer but the green background is OK. As of the placement, good. Good luck!

**NYAC** · 10-31-2007 01:26 PM

Hello friend, I think you have a pretty good idea, I just believe the website needs some retouching... for example when you click on "Choose your city" and I select a city, the first that comes on the page is the message Sorry! No Restaurants with Coupons in this City! , which I think could make someone think that there are no restaurants on the list.... and the "select category" button I don't believe is readibly accessable to the eye .... If I wasn't looking for it, I wouldn't have found it...... when I'm working on a site, I always ask a friend or family member to surf around it so that a "fresh pair of eyes" can look at it and let me know if they found it easy to navigate..... we spend so much time working on these pages that we know exactly where everything is but forget what it might be like for the person looking at it for the first time.....

I hope you don't mind me saying these things, remember we are only here to help eachother to obtain constructive criticism..... having said that... the home page "Introduction" is waayyyy too long I think... I can't imagine 1 in 10 people reading the whole thing...I know I didn't....

and.... on the page of Careers you might want to correct the spelling on this here

We apologies(apologize) but only successful candidates will be contacted

Hope some of this helps.... and I look forward to hearing from your site's success.....