The Worlds Largest Young Entrepreneur Marketplace

**youngmarketplace** · 08-21-2006 02:19 PM

Hey guys

I would like to thank everyone that has so far expressed interest in Young Marketplace. I am thrilled to announce that in the past 10 days we have had inquires from 9 countries from around the world!

Our company product base has grown to 30 companies now!
I would like to take this oppertunity to invite anyone that has a business and that is 25 or younger to join Young Marketplace.

Thank you,

**MpyreDzirez** · 08-21-2006 02:31 PM

services included?....I also didn't see a place to enter any sort of information what so ever...??? I am using FireFox..have you tested everything out first?

You had me at hello....but i'm losing interest fast!

**youngmarketplace** · 08-21-2006 03:02 PM

I've had a lot of service based interest also. We are trying to find a way to accomidate what service based companies offer. Talk to me via one of the online messengers so we can try to find a way that would suit you and other service companies, thank you

**nado** · 08-21-2006 08:42 PM

"World's Largest Young Entrepreneur Marketplace" ... I'm sure I've heard a phrase like this before

Sounds like it's progressing nicely Jorel

I agree the front page copy needs a little work. YEs should be able to easily understand what Young Marketplace is in the first sentence, and can then find out in a step-by-step fashion what is required of them and what they get in return. And then have a quick contact form to either signup or request more information.

Also noticed that the first few lines seem to be we, we, we.... switch it around to YOU and use some rhetorical questions. e.g. "Do you want added exposure for your business?"

Just some thoughts

cheers
nathan

**tekmoney** · 08-21-2006 10:20 PM

You've mastered the art of kissing your own ass.

I dont see any products or anything up there. Where's the proof that you're the largest?

**bankrollboost** · 08-21-2006 11:15 PM

Originally Posted by tekmoney

You've mastered the art of kissing your own ass.

I dont see any products or anything up there. Where's the proof that you're the largest?

"By targeting 200 + companies of young entrepreneurs, all of which will be listed under one roof on the internet. We will become the world's largest young entrepreneur marketplace."

That quote was from their site. I think they are hoping to be the worlds largest.

**Wowzerz** · 08-21-2006 11:25 PM

Originally Posted by tekmoney

You've mastered the art of kissing your own ass.

I dont see any products or anything up there. Where's the proof that you're the largest?

Yup, sounds like a load to me too.

**youngmarketplace** · 08-22-2006 08:42 AM

Actually the origional numbers were targeting were just in the Colorado Area beacause of Young Americans www.yacenter.org they have over 200 young entrepreneurs just in colorado in their database and we were hoping to combine our resources with them. For this we are having to wait a little longer than expected. So yes we are targeting their over 200+ companines and those are around Canada and the United States.

Thank you

**4-Knots** · 08-22-2006 01:51 PM

Originally Posted by youngmarketplace

Hey guys

I would like to thank everyone that has so far expressed interest in Young Marketplace. I am thrilled to announce that in the past 10 days we have had inquires from 9 countries from around the world!

Our company product base has grown to 30 companies now!

great to hear, fair play to u.

**kbud124** · 08-23-2006 11:51 AM

Originally Posted by youngmarketplace

I've had a lot of service based interest also. We are trying to find a way to accomidate what service based companies offer. Talk to me via one of the online messengers so we can try to find a way that would suit you and other service companies, thank you

just sent you a PM about a service business