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Old 09-16-2007, 05:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I just had an interesting telephone conversation with a Mr. John Dibias. He found my website on the Internet when he was looking for someone to help him with his marketing. He said that his original intentions were to check out several Internet marketing experts, evaluate them and then make a decision in a couple of weeks. He also said my salesletter was so compelling it convinced him that he didn't need to look any further.

To make a long story short, I just picked up a brand new client solely on the strength of my salesleter. When he called me, he was already pre-sold. He only called me to verify that my telephone number was real. That's the amazing power of effective copywriting. What about you? Is your copywriting compelling enough to stop prospects in their tracks, and get them to act immediately?

Copywriting is the art of writing words that promote a person, business, opinion or idea. You can have the best looking website in the world, but if your copywriting is substandard, you're leaving a ton of money on the table.

Don't ever underestimate the power of copywriting. Make sure that your marketing materials are written the best that they can be. You will be rewarded many times over!

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congratulations on the new client. Copywriting is so important, what would you say is the keys to a good sales letter?
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Old 09-16-2007, 06:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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congratulations on the new client. Copywriting is so important, what would you say is the keys to a good sales letter?
Thanks! Great question. I've compiled 13 copywriting Rules That Should Never Be Broken. They are as follows:

1. Always Use A Compelling Headline: Readership studies show the first thing readers see when they're scanning ads or sales letters is your headline. The purpose of a headline is to get the reader to stop and read your copy. In essence, your headline acts like a traffic cop or stop sign at a busy intersection. If there's no traffic cop or stop sign, people simply won't stop and chaos ensues! Always use a stop sign!

2. Always Use A Subhead: Especially for long ads and sales letters. A subhead is an additional headline that is not quite as large as the actual headline. The subhead provides additional information and can be wordier than the headline itself. For example, here's a classic headline and subhead:

The Lazy Man's Way To Riches

"Most People Are Too Busy Earning A Living To Make Any Money!"

3. Always Connect Your Opening To Your Headline: After your headline gets the readers attention, next you want to get them interested in your product or service. You do that by immediately delivering what your headline promises. Don't try to be cute, and don't string your readers along. For example, did you notice how I got right into telling you about the 13 Copywriting Rules That Should Never Be Broken?

4. Use Compelling Subheads Throughout Your Copy: This serves two purposes: 1. It breaks up your copy, so that it's easier to read. 2. Subheads are also attention grabbers. Remember, many readers are scanners. They'll scan your copy first, before deciding whether or not to actually read it. That's why it's important to make sure your subheads are compelling and interesting. You can also use bullets, or a combination of bullets and subheads.

5. Always Write The Way You Talk: It's called "Conversational copy." What's conversational copy? Conversational copy simply means talking to the reader in a conversational manner - like you're talking to your best friend.

6. Always Make Your Copy Transparent: Don't try to be cute and don't try to be clever with your writing. The purpose of copy is not to get the reader thinking how clever you are - it's to get the reader thinking "I want to buy that!" Make your intentions as transparent as a brand new window.

7. Always Write About "ME": Don't write about "YOU." Write about "ME" "What's in it for ME?" That's all your readers really care about. "What's in it for them?" Tell them!

8. Always Sell Benefits: Many beginning copywriters, and even some veterans, mistake features for benefits. There's a huge difference. Features are characteristics that physically describe your product or service. Benefits describe how your product or service will help the customer solve his or her problem. In other words, what the customer will gain by using the product or service.

For example, A feature is the room service that your hotel provides, when you're on vacation. A benefit is, room service allows you to relax and eat in the comfort and privacy of your own room at your convenience.

Here's a good analogy: People don't buy drills. They buy the holes the drill makes. Remember, people don't buy products. They buy the benefits they get from the products.

9. Always Be Specific: Give examples...name names...attribute quotes, give facts and figures. Remember, the credibility of your sales message is in direct proportion to the number of specifics you provide. Don't just say "lose weight." Instead say, "lose 7 pounds in 7 days!" Be specific.

10. Always Use Testimonials: Testimonials are an unbeatable guarantee of assurance. Whenever possible always use your customers full name as opposed to initials only. Also, specific comments regarding your product or service are always better than general praise. Remember, specific results are always more powerful than vague opinions.

11. Always Offer "FREE" Bonuses: When used correctly, a FREE bonus increases your readers desire to purchase your product or service. But don't offer the same reconstituted garbage that everyone else is offering. Offer your reader something unique - something of "real" value. It may take some brainstorming on your part to come up with something worthwhile, but I can assure you, the extra sales you'll achieve are worth the effort.

12. Always ASK For The Order: This may seem like common sense to you, but you'd be amazed at how many sales letters or ads I've seen that don't ask for the order. This is called "closing the deal," or in copywriting terms, "call to action." Always ASK for the order!

13. Always Use A P.S.: Readership studies show, after the headline, the P.S. is the second most read part of an ad or sales letter. It's very effective to include a post- script (P.S.) at the end of your ad or sales letter. Your post-script should include an enticement of some sort, to get the reader to order NOW. You should also use the post-script as a final call to "ACTION"!

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So what exactly do you do? I know you gave the definition of copywriting but once a client hires you, what kind of tasks or functions do you perform?
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I will definately put this info to use.Dale you rock! I love reading your posts! If you have anything else to add,I am all ears.Content is king! I mean, Dale is King Hail, King Dale!!
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So what exactly do you do? I know you gave the definition of copywriting but once a client hires you, what kind of tasks or functions do you perform?
There is no easy way to answer that question, since every client has different needs. Some clients just need a basic rewrite of their copy...some clients just need a landing page..some clients require a whole new salesletter or ad. It really all depends on the client, his or her specific needs and of course...budget.

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Thanks, man! I appreciate the props.

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